re-read the first two books, and i have to say... i was very blunt with this first draft. a decent amount of things in the story don't make narrative sense lol such as Taylor and Jesse's relationship, and a few chapters that i probably wrote in a haze of horny and not giving an eff. anyways, i'm going to put in the effort to work it out in editing; it will probably take a few runs to get it right but i think it will get done. so there will be changes to a decent amount of things, i would think. such as the starting city and Johan's base; going to call it Springseed City, and obviously the relationship between Taylor and Jesse is going to make a lot more sense, because it really is an eyesore the way it is now. i'll make those versions available on amazon soon lol yea, this is just business folks, also i really like how raw this first draft is and i'd rather leave a place for it to exist. but yea, gonna smooth out the edges for amazon, though i doubt i could make it pg-13... actually... maybe... lol nah

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as for this last book... it's coming... i promise... lol