Hey, howdy.

If you don't know, this story does not go through any review process. it's the raw first draft, checked with G-docs and Grammarly for any gross language errors, and then posted online.

I started this story as a way to cheer Robert Blaise as he goes through a tough spot in life AND as a way to wean myself back into writing after eight months away due to mental health issues.

And people wonder why I'm so vicious with negativity in the comments.... go figure.

This content has been misappropriated from Royal Road; report any instances of this story if found elsewhere.

ANYWAY.

I would like the community's help to identify any plot holes or unfinished storylines you'd like to see featured in this story.

Now is the time to give feedback and to vent about the mistakes this amateur writer did.

> Go nuts. And please, BE CIVIL.

If you disagree with someone else's feedback, do not reply. Either keep your silence, send me a DM, or report it to RR, on a scale from harmless to egregiously toxic.

But if you want to add or expand on someone's feedback in a friendly and constructive way, then do reply.

I reserve the right to delete any comments I want, for whatever reason.