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Author's Note

Author's Note

WOW. I can't believe you've reached the end of the story!!! After almost four years of working on this book, I'm so glad I attracted new readers! I didn't expect a teen drama to take off so well on Royal Road! Thank you all so so so much for your support and feedback (especially feedback!). This version of the story will probably stay up for a while until I get around to revising it. In the meantime, comment whatever feedback you have (honest but constructive please, I can't stress this enough, I don't want to have to report or block anyone), whether it's on this chapter, on the other chapters, or in your reviews! I will take note of all your advice for when I revise.

One thing readers have said is that the story seems to drag, and by re-reading it, I noticed that I do drag plotlines and add unnecessary chapters. My goal is to shorten the book, so I will take note of what chapters are the least needed. Feel free to comment on what chapters you feel should stay or go! I am rethinking my method at the beginning of the book (telling from the POV of a 4-year old) and I'll see what I can do to work around the 1st-person narrative. Also, sorry about the weird updates the past couple days, for some reason I had these scheduled until Saturday so I had to manually update them.

If you discover this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen. Please report the violation.

Meanwhile, you can read my reupload of Versus, my scifi, which I've worked on for six years already! Read it here: https://https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/80265/versus-parts-i-and-ii

My upcoming book is my first-ever LitRPG!!!! I haven't gotten to actually writing it yet, but I will update you.

Until then, I love you all, and I'll see you!

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