Ki'el did not expect boundless sympathy from Lai Shi Po, and would have been surprised if the woman had been immediately or limitlessly helpful. That made it difficult for her to summarize the reason why she had called for the woman in only a few words, so she walked Po through the general circumstances quickly first.
The insistence that there was no room in the Lesser House. Being shown rooms with no floors. Being given a room with no floors. The attack by a man who seemed manipulated by a bracelet--Ki'el, attentive to the advice of Sister Futi, hedged her wording there slightly--and who had been manipulated to die at the hands of Elder Gol. Having time to herself.
But then, Ki'el hesitated. She looked at Po, who was taking all these events so far very stoically, and if Ki'el were to guess based on the woman's disposition, she thought the woman was unsurprised and perhaps even bored. She could imagine that some, though likely not all, of this was fairly standard for the Lesser House. But she also was not sure she wanted to speak too much of Sobon's gift, not after Futi had been so very cautious of it, and not when Sobon himself had said little.
But there was no avoiding it, and it wasn't as though the topic was now completely concealed. Although she phrased it to make sense to Po, she felt strange again, noting how inconsistent she might appear to others. "You know that Alassi spoke of leaving me with some wisdom before she left."
"Of course," Po said, sounding bored, or perhaps just guarded.
"It was... delivered. And now I have a... spiritual helper, perhaps. A mental assistant."
"Mental and spiritual..." Po narrowed her eyes slightly. "Coming on the heels of other manipulations. I see."
"There was some... accusation, or perhaps just concern," she said, glancing at Brother Du, who remained silent and did his best to appear unaffected. "But my mind was not on those things. I was thinking about Alassi's ability to manipulate substances, because I was thinking about the room repairs."
Po, at least, looked sympathetic to the idea that Ki'el was distractible, but said nothing.
"So I came out here with... my assistant, attempting to learn the basics of inscription," she said at last, feeling more embarrassed as she talked. And she led Po to the crude scratches in the dirt where she'd been. "In the end, the full intent that I wish to perform is nothing more than an artificial floor using the planes of force that ...she uses. I was instructed that involves three or four simple markers to define the region, and then a simple glyph to create the effect between them."
"In principle, a simple script," agreed Po, glancing down at the circle marks. "To my eyes, this is a complete beginner's intent mark, but it is one. If your assistant taught you how to do that much, it is at least competent."
Ki'el could feel herself flushing and resisted the urge to squirm at the scrutiny. "When I considered trying to get tools to make a more... portable version... I ran afoul of Sister Futi. Who was..."
"I am aware of Sister Futi's capabilities," Brother Du said quietly.
Ki'el nodded at him, grateful that she did not need to mince words. "Because she sensed what I was doing, she forbade me from bringing any such inscriptions into the Lesser House."
"She's probably not wrong," Po said, and Ki'el felt her heart drop. Po glanced at her after a moment. "Or rather, in this instance, she is. But there is a world of difference, Ki'el, between an inscriptionist with a master and someone thinking that the art will work reliably and in the way they envision. All masters, including yours, have years--usually decades, sometimes centuries of failures behind them. We learn to detect failures as quickly as we can, from the smallest signs. Perhaps your spiritual assistant can perform that function--but until Sister Futi can confirm this herself, or have it confirmed by another, it would be foolish to trust too easily."
Ki'el scowled and looked down at the dirt. "All I really want is a floor to sleep on." She thought she sensed a small burst of emotion, turning to see that it was Brother Du, not Po.
"In truth, when I accepted the current state of the Lesser House, I did not think about that part of it," he said. "Though I would think the correct answer, rather than a script--"
"Oh by all means," Po broke in suddenly, and Ki'el could hear a cutting edge to her voice. "Suggest raw planks, Du. Suggest them." When Brother Du looked to her in surprise, Po moved toward him in a flash, and even Du seemed to feel threatened when she snagged the front of his uniform. "You can't possibly have forgotten, can you?"
"Ah... in truth, Sister..."
"Three times," Po snapped. "I went to the healing house three times while staying in the Lesser House, because turning in my sleep ripped my skin on raw wood of the floor or walls. Blood loss, parasites, and disease. I remember the way the sect treats the Lesser House, 'Brother' Du," she said, with some obvious scorn. "As do you. They are overworked and underappreciated before they have to deal with serious problems because of the shitty condition of the housing that the Sect itself provides. Housing that the Sect even has the nerve to be proud of."
Ki'el watched Brother Du, whose panic slowly gave way to a more composed appearance. "You did not fix the broken wood."
"Perhaps," Po said, with what she probably thought was feigned sweetness, although she couldn't muster that kind of sarcasm in the moment. "But you act as though it would be safe for anyone to do. That would be a step beyond bad guidance, and into active neglect, Brother."
Du held up his hands in a sign of surrender, and Ki'el felt herself start breathing again, though she had not noticed herself stop. "You are right," he said after a moment. "I have forgotten since long ago what it is like to have mortal skin. It is reckless of me to give advice to someone at Gold Qi, simply because I would have no problem with it. As a penance, I would happily assist with providing an appropriate sleeping surface."
Ki'el didn't like that answer, and she was pleased when Po immediately shook her head. "No," she said, "you can stay out of this for now. Ki'el. I can verify you have a correct intent mark, here. If you can demonstrate an appropriate mark and intent for the floor field, I will personally engrave the script onto..." she glanced around. "Oh, I don't know. Rocks or something."
Ki'el felt relief, and moved to another, untouched patch of dirt. Kuli...
{ I believe you understand the idea well enough, } Kuli answered quickly. { And seeing you struggle and learn will show honesty in the eyes of the others. They will not expect you to succeed the first time. }
So Ki'el sat silently for a moment, trying to recall the glyph she thought she understood, and though she didn't quite catch it happening, she was sure that Kuli adjusted it slightly. And when she was sure, she drew out a symbol in the dirt, not quite correctly getting the thread of qi as she sketched it in.
Two more quick tries after that, Ki'el frowned at the qi thread in the dirt. This is not right, is it?
{ No, } Kuli agreed. { You have the correct symbol, but it is not meant to be used like that. These three lines are supposed to connect to pieces that name a target, the opposite end of the naming mark. Call it an arrow mark, with the naming mark being the target. You can still attach arrow marks to this, but you will need to be very careful. }
So Ki'el, as delicately as she could, sketched out from one of the three marks, her intent connecting it to the intent mark she had left behind. When she moved to join it to the full mark, however, her finger brushed the qi thread she had left behind, disrupting it, and the larger mark disappeared.
"I think I've seen enough," Po said behind her, naked contempt in her voice, and Ki'el felt her heart jump into her lungs. She turned to find the two watching her work. "Aside from being a complete novice, Ki'el, it's clear that you do not understand inscription at all. You have the correct mark, but you have put no thought into it at all."
Ki'el fell backwards, into the dirt, unsure of what to say to that, but even as she opened her mouth to try to say anything in her own defense, Po continued.
"I can see your master's style in the use of the script," she said, "but you made two serious blunders with it. The first is a lack of a power source, meaning you would need to power it with your own qi all through the night. The other is a lack of an off switch. If you carved the engravings here, they would be active as you carried them. If you dropped one and didn't know it, the plane of force might cut into anything that got in the middle of it unaware."
Ki'el, knowing full well that the same basic inscription powered a sword, felt sick and humiliated at that thought, and looked down. In the end... although she had been proud, it truly was foolish of her to experiment without a master... was it not?
{ I would not have let you use it in this way, } Kuli said, quietly, as Ki'el sat there in the quiet for a moment. { I was aware of both issues. I did not expect you to finish by today, but used the floor to motivate you to work harder. }
"Still," Po said into the stillness, "You demonstrated the correct mark and intent. It would have functioned." And Ki'el watched as four small rocks in the vicinity seemed to zip at Po all by themselves, and the woman got down in the dirt, pulling her intricate carving stylus out of her space ring.
It was a matter of thirty seconds, if that, before Po handed her four engraved rocks. Ki'el had watched the woman engrave for hours on end on the ride up to the Sect... and it only served as a lesson to her, now, just how simplistic what she was actually trying to accomplish was. Simple symbols with simple intent, and even then, she all but failed.
"Pour your qi into the widest mark, here," Po said, indicating one. "The spiral mark triggers it on, or off. The qi storage will not last for more than a night--not if all three of you sleep on it. And it will not stand up to any attacks. Since there's only three marks, it will support at most half a room, and the qi will stretch further if you use it less. Don't let anyone jostle or take the rocks." Po paused. "Make sure all the marks are facing up. I don't think there's even another thing to say about it. It's nothing more than a very crude tool."
"Thank you, Po," Ki'el said, quietly, testing the rocks only briefly before holding them in her hands and clutching them tightly. She wasn't quite sure why this gift from the woman hurt her heart, somewhat, but it did, making her regret how she had thought of the woman so far. She was... uncouth, and crude. But this help was not meaningless.
Lai Shi Po sniffed at her, and Ki'el for a moment thought that the woman was also sentimental, but after a moment, she talked again. "I encouraged your master to give me a name as she pleased, and I'm not going to scorn you for thinking you are familiar with me. But on this matter, as on many other matters, I am your superior, not your friend. Ki'el. You shall not experiment with inscription without someone present. Until the Sect deems you worthy to perform inscriptions without supervision, do not."
Ki'el wilted under the woman's tongue, and she nodded. "I understand. Thank you, Lai Shi Po."
"Better." Po straightened, and her voice lightened. "Aside from the living conditions, how do you find the Sect so far?"
Ki'el looked up at her, surprised. After a moment, she put the rocks in her pocket and tried to match her sitting stance to Po's. "I... do not dislike it. There are many wonderful things here. Although I am disappointed that the... qi here is not fresh."
"You noticed that?" Brother Du's voice sounded genuinely surprised.
Ki'el just looked up at him and nodded. "I asked... my assistant, and she said that there is a barrier directing all the fresh qi to the top of the island, and what filters down to us has already passed the others."
"Oh, we know it's true," Po said, as though Ki'el were defensive or explaining it to them. "It's just unusual that you would be sensitive enough to tell. Or maybe, strange that you know enough to put it into words."
"It became obvious on my trip back from the healing house," Ki'el said, "but moreso when I sat close to the edge and expected the breeze to be fresh. A wind blowing in from afar should not feel like the island behind me."
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Brother Du chuckled at that. "I suppose an Illan would know," he said. "Sea breeze is sea breeze, unless it is blowing the smell of something specific to you." Ki'el nodded at that, though she was a little surprised at the comment, which he seemed to notice. "I have stood on shores, and on mountaintops," he said suddenly, as though there was some need to explain himself, "and I have stood on the top of the island, though I am rarely allowed to stay there long. Everywhere else here is simply... downwind. It was a strange sense, until I understood it properly, but ever since then, I have sympathized with those who can tell."
"Ki'el's qi is unusually pure," Po said to him, conversationally, "because of the way her master taught her. I don't know how long that will last..." she turned and considered Ki'el.
"I am aware that drawing in dirty qi is not ideal," she said. "And I do not intend to use... my Master's methods at all times. I spent some of my time today trying to find a way to purify the qi that comes in, slightly. It is not as effective as..." she nodded at Po, "...but I think it will help."
"Purify the qi?" Brother Du's voice was dubious, and Ki'el began to worry that she was doing something silly again.
But instead of getting defensive, Ki'el held her two hands in front of her, where the two could see, and though it took her a few moments to focus, she began her qi turning exercise again, trying to focus on not only the left and right hand spins, but also the in and the out. When she was able to find the method again, with some difficulty, she opened her eyes, seeing the qi turning and the flakes falling gently away from it.
She could also see the serious looks on the faces of both Lai Shi Po and Brother Du.
"It is a method unlike my master's," Ki'el admitted, doing her best to stabilize the effect as her heart raced and her guts squirmed at the scrutiny, again. Although she knew she should not talk too flippantly... "The power cycles that Sobon taught me were meant to..." she caught herself, turning the aether. "...well, they work on a different process. But what Sobon taught me was to manipulate without intent, and I understood that this was important. As I was sitting, I began to wonder what impurity in qi even was, and so I wished to see what happened when qi was used. This is... qi without added intent, but used. I think... in my mind, I think that if I used qi this dirty while it was within me... then..." she nodded at the flakes of qi nature and intent falling away from the turning, white-ish qi.
"It is known that impurities build up," Brother Du said, as he examined the turning qi, "but a method like this..."
"In its own way, it is profound," said Po, and Ki'el looked at her, surprised. Po returned her look, her face once again showing some amount of boredom or arrogance that Ki'el was not sure she understood. "It is a novice's technique, built on simple foundations. But it shows a grasp of the basic principles that is important."
Surprisingly, Brother Du openly scoffed at that. "It is interesting," he said, standing back up. "But it is interesting in the way that many novice techniques are. It shows new thought while also displaying prominently that you fundamentally do not understand Qi."
Ki'el almost lost her entire concentration at that, and it was only a mental nudge from Kuli that... let Ki'el notice the irritated look on Po's face as the other woman turned to Du.
"What do you mean?" Po asked, calmly enough that if Ki'el had not seen the look of irritation, she might have thought the woman was being... academic?
"Manipulation without intent, and purification of qi," Du said. "They are interesting concepts, but in the end, they misrepresent the goal of purified qi. Ultimately, the idea of using purified qi strikes me as worse than silly, as an active misstep on the road of cultivation. The goal is to have qi that serves your purposes, that is fully attuned to you, that represents all your knowledge and all your experience. Gathering qi and stripping it of all that which does not match your own spirit is one thing--but stripping it of everything, of all the knowledge and will of the world? That is ridiculous."
{ False and wrong, } Kuli informed her quietly, even as Po considered for only half a moment before speaking.
"I think you're wrong, Du," she said. "Much of what I do and study--inscription, alchemy, spatial qi--involves cases where foreign intent in your qi can be deadly."
"And it's fine to remove intent that does not belong," argued Du, and somehow, Ki'el thought she was seeing another side to the man. He took a step back and began to pace, his face far more animated than she had seen before. "But qi should always belong to its user, and whatever remains in qi, from whatever source... it is wisdom from the world--" { False, again. } "--which can be carefully studied and meditated upon. While I've admittedly never seen flakes of qi intent falling out in a purification technique... it strikes me as wrong, and wrong-headed. Qi isn't simply qi. It is the very will of the world itself, containing all of the profound wisdom of creation."
Ki'el listened to the man talk, and although the topic was making her feel strange, she began to understand even without Kuli interjecting that this was a topic that Brother Du only thought he understood. By the end, she had begun to flush her own spirit out again with Righteous Aether, feeling her various excited feelings dim slightly so that she could sense the world clearly, again.
Po, too, seemed unconvinced. "I must ask, Brother Du, whether you're trying to convince the girl, me... or yourself?"
Brother Du rounded on Po like he wanted to say something harsh, but he stopped himself, considered, and took a deep breath. "You might be right," he said, his voice sounding a lot more like the stoic, even-keeled man he'd been a few minutes ago. "It was... a somewhat visceral experience to see intent flaking away from qi as though it was... actual dirt. I..." he considered, and looked up at the trees.
Ki'el looked around, too, realizing as she did that time was turning towards evening, already.
"Brother Du," Po said after a moment. "This is one of those conversations that makes me want to spill secrets, but I won't. Suffice it to say that purified qi, or better, [Primordial Qi] is the proper base for all other effects. A person may gather intent and nature into their qi, but the qi should be built on top of pure qi."
"Sister Shi Po," Du returned, his voice unexpectedly harsh. "I have spent a century of my life thinking long and hard about what people are meant to do with their qi. Ki'el looked at him, reappraising the so-called 'Brother' as she did. "I will not argue that purifying qi is not good, but..." He suddenly shook his head, and looked away. "Apologies. I'm not sure what I am arguing."
Ki'el looked back down at the cycling qi before her, watching it turn, and as she did, she thought about what it meant--until the moment when she understood what it actually was. "Is it because it is the qi here, specifically?"
The other two turned towards her, saying nothing.
"Because it is the sect's qi," she clarified, as she raised her hands, and the cycle between them. "I am not turning and cycling qi from my dantian, but from the environment. And it is that qi, the sect's qi, that sheds intent like it is dirt."
Brother Du flinched, and Ki'el could swear she felt a small qi spike from him. "That is... certainly not the whole reason," he said, taking a deep breath. "But now that you mention it... it does shed some light on my irritability."
"I would expect so," Po chuckled, before turning to Ki'el. "Setting aside the reason why... can you do anything else to describe what you're doing? The method?"
Ki'el considered. "Sobon taught me to create a single thread of aether," she said, knowing the word would be unfamiliar to Du, and mostly unfamiliar to Po. She knew that Sobon had spoken to her a little bit about it, but not at length, not when Ki'el was listening, at least. "without intent, as part of a pattern that would produce more of the same. Obviously if that aether sample was tainted, so would everything it produced. I only... sought to produce a thread of qi without intent, qi that was being 'used' without gaining or losing anything. And... I suppose I had the intent to see in front of me what would happen when I 'used' qi internally."
"But also..." Ki'el took a moment to stop and breathe, considering her words. In truth, she didn't understand this part. "Sobon spoke of the... math of rings and turning. The nature of this technique was that the aether, when it is done turning, becomes a part of the thorn at the center, ready for use. In this case, the qi joins the thorn when it has no further need to be part of the turning, when all the intent has been shed. It is... not Primordial Qi. But it seems to be purer."
"It looks like it's supposed to be self-sufficient," mused Po. "But it isn't."
"Mine is not," Ki'el agreed.
"Most people at Gold Qi aren't even considering the purity of what goes in. And in truth, I'm not sure how much it matters." Po's eyes refocused, directly on Ki'el's. "You've tried it. Put purified qi in your dantian."
Ki'el hesitated only a moment. "Yes. It felt..." What could she say? She had no basis for comparison. "It was... a lot, at once."
"At once?" Brother Du's voice sounded strange. "You passed a large quantity of qi directly into your dantian? With what technique?"
"Technique?" Ki'el looked at him, feeling like it was an odd question. It was true, Kuli's advice for breathing in the qi was strangely particular. "I... my assistant told me that because of the purification process, it was already my own. I used a breathing technique, but... acknowledged it as already mine, already pure. It seemed to pass through cleanly."
Both of them frowned at that, and Ki'el sat there, looking from one face to the other, watching them both think through what had been said, until at last Brother Du broke the silence. "I see," he said. "I've often found that the highest-purity qi sources were easiest to cultivate, but even those required... technique, to absorb safely. Your technique occurred outside of your body, and therefore looks odd to our eyes, but it may end up being no different in the end." He stood up a little straighter. "You have truly given us much to think about. For my part, as a member of the sect, I will pay for your time in sect points. I imagine you are not yet too familiar with them, but trust that they are a symbol of respect for your time and expertise." He looked at Lai Shi Po. "But I have other tasks, and I believe that Sister Shi Po does as well. Unless there is firm need to remain...?"
Po just laughed, but shook her head. "You're still unwilling to be honest in front of your juniors, Du. Ki'el. Sobon contacted me with a certain method recently, one I was not aware of. I trust you are?"
Ki'el's eyes widened slightly, but she nodded.
"We'll most likely leave soon. I should have left earlier, but..." she shrugged. "I get distracted, and the sect enjoys teasing me. I need to get the others where they're going. If you need my expertise, I will give it to you. But... try to be more than a complete novice before you ask me for things." She straightened, not bothering even to brush the dirt off of her knees, and she gave Ki'el a strangely lopsided smirk that was more like the street urchin Ki'el had first seen her as than the well-dressed inscriptionist that she had been masquerading as lately. "I do have some pride."
"Do you." Ki'el tried to keep the tone of her voice light, so that it would be obvious she meant it as a joke, but she wasn't sure how well she was able to do that at the drop of a hat.
"Ah, your doubt wounds me," Lai Shi Po put a hand against her forehead, feigning a faint, but when she started to actually fall over backwards she turned it into a tumbling roll, and then after a moment, with some force of qi, popped herself back to her feet, a ways away, and grinning. "Truly, Ki'el, I hope that you enjoy this place. I think you will, when you escape the Lesser House. Places like this love and respect the truth, and find joy in learning and sharing. The Lesser House..." she went quiet.
Ki'el crossed her arms over her chest, unsure of exactly how the other woman would justify the existence and nature of the awful building and its occupants.
"I think," Po said after a moment, "that it's necessary in order to keep certain types of people from succeeding in places like this. I'm not sure that it works, and for certain, not perfectly. But I can see you, and perhaps Mian, doing far better here than most that can afford the ticket. Because you are not the kind of people that the Lesser House exists to keep out."
"I have heard similar before," Ki'el said. "Still, it feels..."
"Disrespectful?" Po laughed. "Exactly, Ki'el. It is painful, and disrespectful. Just work, and survive it. You'll do well." She turned. "We can escape now, Brother Du. I've distracted her."
Du rolled his eyes, and rather than moving away, moved closer and bowed to Ki'el. "Thank you for your insights, young sister Xoi Doua Ki'el. Perhaps I will ask you to demonstrate your techniques for me another day."
Ki'el returned the bow. "As long as you do not expect too much of me, Senior Brother Du," she replied. "Be well."
"You as well."
Ki'el let the two of them leave, and then took her stones with some eagerness to the small broken room where Mian had led her earlier, holding the actual floor glyph stone and charging it with her purified qi until it was full. As the evening was coming on, there were more people around, but Ki'el ignored them, and even managed to mostly ignore the stairs as they shifted uncomfortably beneath her feet.
When she got to the room, Xam was there, looking tired.
"Xam." Ki'el paused. There was a wide, rough plank of wood next to her, one that had not been smoothed or cleaned. "That wood..."
"I'm sorry, Ki'el. I was trying to find the spare time to prepare something more." She scowled at it, looking offended. "I... suppose it's better than nothing."
Ki'el just raised her hand, though, showing the stone. "Before you worry too much, let me see if this works."
Xam raised an eyebrow at that, but Ki'el fetched the three marker stones, finding places on the wooden supporting planks for each of them, and then triggered the main inscription. As she'd hoped and dreamed, a faint outline of a triangle appeared between the three points, and when Ki'el moved to stand on it, it held her weight easily.
She glanced down at the stone in her hand, sensing the qi use. It was... not trivial, but especially if she--if they could all contribute qi to it before sleeping, it should last the night.
"That is..." Xam crawled to the edge of it, reaching to touch the edge.
"It's sharp," Ki'el warned, and Xam stopped before touching it. "Sharper than a blade."
"That sounds like an uncomfortable thing to sleep on."
Ki'el realized it was true in the same moment, and she sat down and stared at it, realizing that if the design had been square, if it had taken up the whole room, it would have been much easier. But... it also wasn't difficult to imagine finding a way to put something along the edge that would keep them from hitting it in the night, even if it was just a tree branch.
Come to think of it... Ki'el took the rough board and positioned a part of it near the edge, trying to scrape some of the roughness away. She could feel the stone pulling harder at its stored qi, but it did scrape the board a bit.
"Don't do that." Xam clicked her tongue and shook her head. "But... it will hold your weight? Our weight?"
"Po thought it might hold all three of us, if we will its storage with qi."
"Po? Lai Shi Po?" When Ki'el nodded, Xam threw her hands up. "What is she even still doing here? She was supposed to deliver Uncle and the others..."
"She said she was distracted."
"Poor uncle." Xam sat down. "Well... I suppose we'll find a way to make the edges safe, and we have to worry about charging it with qi. But with that and the floor that's left, we should have enough room to sleep."
"That's all I wanted from it," Ki'el confirmed, stepping away and deactivating the stones for now. "Dinnner?"
"It's not quite time," Xam hedged, but set the board aside as Ki'el picked up her stones. "Tell me about the stones, and Lai Shi Po. There's no way whatever happened is as simple as you made it sound."
So Ki'el filled her in, as the two of them moved back downstairs, knowing that Mian would be helping cook dinner for the Lesser House. And Ki'el... realized, as she moved, that she had not eaten a lot lately, and she was looking forward to whatever Mian and the Lesser House was going to serve.