SEEEEXX TIME.
What I'm going to do/have done! (Section)
Did you know that vegan burgers are in fact fire? Here are the pros and cons of vegan burgers
Pros:
* No dead and sad and tortured animal.
* Bussin taste. Better than meat. On me.
* Vegan girls/guys find you 80% more attractive. (Not yet tested, but I'm feelin confident!)
Cons:
* Vegan girls/guys got no meat. (That last one is worse if you're into guys so rip those folk.)
#Vegan Burgers Bussin.
Not on twatter though, that shit gonna get political or some crap.
Or echo-chamerddit.
Or discorgroomer.
Or Royalr-
Okay, now let's change the subject to less spooky booky waters. Like...the fantasy outline! And rape!
Oh.
So yeah for a long while I was thinkin "Hmmm, raping the Main POV character sounds like a good decision." until recently when I got an I thought/think is a lot cooler. So like since this rape thing happens about 2/3rd ish into the story. So the Main POV characters have already changed a lot since their starting point/we're reaching the culmination of all their development.
Which is basically to become this ideal ruler-type figure. And like exert control over their emotions and understand others and manipulate them and blah blah blah.
So originally the rape thing was to test all that self-control sorta thing, or more specifically to not get blinded by hatred/emotions in their decision-making process. (Since their walking a very tight line in the story right now with a party that they're trying to convince.)
But like then I sat down and was like "What if they planned for them to get raped as part of their overly complex strategy to win this legal battle." and boom. That's how the idea was sorta born.
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Anyway, I just thought it was a cool and interesting idea/conflict. Since the reader themselves won't know this after all of this shit is explained, which is meant to add another layer to the character's decision-making process on a re-read. Plus it keeps them in control while still giving them one final really hard test of all they learned throughout their uh journey let's say.
Also because that gives another piece of trauma for said POV character and other POV characters to work through in an already stressful final 3rd part.
So yeah, epic sauce.
It also might just not be added in at all cuz ya know outline stage.
But I really want to get to that point so I can at least try to properly outline it.
And yeah if it isn't obvious this story gets pretty dark so I'm probably gonna need to add a content warning in the desc + start so I don't ruin little Timmy's childhood.
And like besides what my demeanor and epic jokes imply I do in fact understand that rape is no bueno and occasionally feel bad for my POV characters.
So here's a little idea I have about my story that isn't depressing.
Said raped POV character and other POV character sorta-ish adopts/takes care of green girl that is very traumatized for prior said war criminal thing. And other stuff. probably more rape.
But the point is, they grow into a sorta family that helps take care of each other and handle the stresses of needing to survive in a very ordinary way. You know money issues, struggles at work, getting the neighbors not to figure out you're a princess, a morally dubious 'hero' and a kinda slave to another nation to make sure they don't murder you in your sleep. Stuff like that.
And I plan to add a lot of wholesome and family-ish-like moments between the trio. Probably some stuff that is just nice and fluffy and helps build their cute little bond.
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And by the way, the other POV character is the one who murdered the green child's mommy figure in cold blood so they could get here in the first place and is now keeping it a secret and that constantly weighs on their mind and decision-making process! Creating a melancholy in every scene since-
Okay, I promise the actual story in my head is not grimdark as far as I can tell. It just sounds really dark when the edgy moments are so more specifically explained/set up back to back. Maybe I should uh you know think more about some nice parts I'm outlinin' up to share with u guys to prove that.
Anyway uh yeah...wholesome story right?
Things I wrote just for you (And the others here as well!...Section.)
(Damn...it do be up.)
(...Something something sex.)
(Wait is this actually a good opener for the 69 chapter?)
???: "hh-Hmm! Now class, no jokes. This is a very serious and delicate number. Understood?...Good. 69 is a number associated with a sexual position in which 2 people's mouths are making contact/near the other party's genitalia. It is generally used by degenerates. However on page 343 in "Narra-"
???2: "Excuse me, ma'am? Why has the council decided the actual act of doing 69 isn't allowed to be documented?"
???: "...Well...to put it simply...we fear that the comment section will be filled with "Nice" comments."
???2: "Understandable."
The final section! (Section.)
Oh...no sex. Sad emoji.
End chapter btw.