I'd like to know what you guys think about the story so far as well so far.
I'd also like for you guys to ask questions about the story, characters, skills and anything else you'd like to know.
Also if you have any suggestions about the story please have read up to the latest chapter.
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Questions
Q. What is an Eidiolon?
An Eidiolon is a spirit which tends to be far more powerful than a normal spirit, not only that they have a corporeal form and tend to be the personification of a concept, enviroment, item or even a spirit that has became powerful enouth or skilled enouth to naturally have a corporeal form. When Darkness was a wisp she had a semi-solid core which is why she could get hurt as a wisp physicl but didn;t have a solid form. As an Eidiolon she grew a form which matched her Id on a surface level(Won't get into detail as its a plot point). Eidiolons are special because they tend to become extreamly powerful and nigh-immortal eventually. Darkness as a Profound Eidiolon is a more powerful than most new-born Eidiolons and has higher potential whihc is why every stat gained 100, while every affinity gained 50 due to her nature.
Asked by Nighmora and ZanthaV
Q. Will she evolve again mabye at 25 or 50?
She will evolve again but she won't evolve at 25 or 50. To explain I'm going to gave to explain how she evolved at 20 first. A normal Wisp would evolve at level 10 were as Darkness was a Profound Wisp which evolves at double the normal level requirment 20. Darkness won't evolve until level 500 since she's a Profound Eidiolon and a normal Eidiolon would evolve at 250 since they are high tier evolutions. Evolution of creatures from Ohmaze depends on the base creature, circumstance and variant type if there is any. Darkness is one of the rarest types of variant while Vari is a more common type.
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Suggestions
Nighmora--needs a transformation skill to assume the form of other races plus she should do that mana pressure training that the skeleton did.
Reply--I won't be giving Darkness a transformation skill since I personally don't like the idea of darkness not being what she is without a plot important reason. I'll probly get her a transformation skill but it will only be for later plot. The training that Rune did was a form of Ki training that uses mana instead of Ki and is used to reiginforce the body and skills of the user. it would be impractical for Darkness since she's focused on magic rather than fighting.
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Kernos-- Darkness could always grow stronger and go with the "Girl in danger, saves her, turns out she was a princess." route.
Reply--I thought about going down this kind of route but decided against it because personally it feels clichie to do that kind of thing. Although in saying that i might still go down a similare route with a twist for example: Save a beuatiful girl turns out to be an effeminite wrongfully exiled prince trying to get back his kingdom. but thats just an example... mabye.
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Jaffa-I think it's strange that the MC didn't try to increase the HP and quite a few other skills, so far. Also, no horde?
Reply--She didn't try to increase he HP and other skills for a few reasons. for her HP she was to focused on her MP as well as rarly even noticing the danger she was in due to how strong she became with a million mana. she also had compleate faith in her regen once she put it to 10%. The only reason she increased her HP near the end of the arc was because she realised her low health after getting hit in a fight. She's also not been improving some skills because she couldn't and some because she has more useful skills to use. She doen't have a horde because she doesn't need nor want one... yet.
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Kymodos--I think she needs a more humanoid form and more hp.
Reply--She'll get more HP but not a more human form due to what I have planned.
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Nighmora again--you can make it so that like when she farmed mana shrooms she farm the main ingreidtent for health potions so she can increase her health
Reply--I have similar ideas but it's not going to be for health for a plot reason.
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hurt_lock3r-- Needs a humanoid form, a little subtlety never hurts. Maybe transform into a less 'dangerous' looking person? Other than that, the story looks great.
Reply--Same awnser as Nighmora and Kymodos about transformation and forms. Also thanks for the complement.cool [../../../Scripts/tinymce/js/tinymce/plugins/emoticons/img/smiley-cool.gif]
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Berserkjelly--
I kinda want the MC to go lone wolf throughout the book but occasionally finding somewhere to be and people to talk to for awhile before moving on whilst they grow learning more and more from each place they go to and each person they meet until they have found something to do or something to achieve which will become the driving point to the plot. It really depends on how you want the MC to grow and which direction the dtory goes but I personally don't like the MC sticking to one spot for too long (Otherwise it becomes broing for the reader.) and in every book there has to be conflict so create conflict for the MC to tackle.
Thanks for the chapters thus far I enjoyed this quite alot. ^_^
Reply--I have similare plans for how the story will progress but she won't be going lone wolf for a while if at all. Story will be going along the lines of new places new challanges and will meet up with people mentioned or met in the story by that pount depending on what will happen. as you guys have problly already guessed she will be going to the merrow village and met Dargeon again. P.S thanks for the complimentcool [../../../Scripts/tinymce/js/tinymce/plugins/emoticons/img/smiley-cool.gif]
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Tidbits about the story.
Evolutions always come with stats but some times come at a cost for example Eidiolons will gain 50 stats when evolved into.(Darkness gained double by being Profound) Those stat for the Eidolons won't benifit Character statistics other than luck, so although they gaing 50 Vit they don't gain 500 HP same goes for Int and mana. This is why her HP and MP didn't increase when she evolved.
There are many world in this story which are inter conected as youve problly guessed from reading the story esspecially if you didn't overlook me saying merrow are from a diffrent world. All of these worlds will have diffrent Systems inplace for that world benifits. Ohmaze has a game-like system to enhance its enhabatints but is a tame world compared to the other connected worlds. Some worlds have a similar system but would be unable to call stats like Darkness and other Ohmaze inhabitants(the merrow for example), others with be similar to earth with the way organisims grow and evolve and some will have esoteric systems that seems contradictory. Every one of these worlds have unique system benifits that only those in that wold can use, Ohmaze has non-toxic mana unlike most if not all connected worlds.