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What I changed

So here's the deal . After I started working on these I realized that a lot of what I wrote was badly written. Even I was having trouble figuring out what was going on. I fixed a lot of that.

Plot wise you can look below.

Episode 61 part 2:

There is now a mention of punishment aspects in the beginning.

Isaac uses Snowballs ability to duplicate the delay fireballs he attaches to Squirmy’s back.

Episode 61 part 3:

I held Snowball up to help cast another double spell. “N-no more!” She objected. She was looking kind of green all of a sudden.

“But Snowball! We still have a bunch more to go! You can’t give up now!” I shook her back and forth.

“Do-don’t! blurrb!” she threw up a rainbow of dead fishies.

“You know Snowball if you don’t start eating fruit you’ll get scurvy like a real pirate.” I warned.

She waved her arms around “I’m a cat! If I don’t eat meat I’ll die!” she cried.

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“Aren’t there vegan cats? Alice showed me online once.” I responded.

“There’s no such thing as a vegan cat! That’s just animal abuse!” she insisted.

“Huh… Hey Snowball, since you don’t actually have cat DNA would you eating another cat be considered cannibalism?” I asked.

“Probably not… I’ll try anything once. That’s how I got addicted to cocaine!” her eyes seemed to swirl with black and white, “You find the cat and I’ll try it out.”

I nodded in agreement before remembering something important. Shaking Snowball, I yelled, “Come on lets hurry up and get this fireball set up!”

Snowball seemed to freak out, “Fine! Okay! Please stop shaking me!” she cried.

I attached another punishment fireball to Squirmy’s hide. They were pretty much invisible, so there was no way they would be found.

I found that the copy spell inside Snowball was connected to the system, so whatever spells I put in, the system would not only copy them, but provide the aspects for the second spell. It was a happy discovery.

She didn’t really like it when I activated the copy spell. Apparently it made everything backwards including sounds, vision, touch, taste, and smell. even her thoughts, her heart beat, and blood flow, whatever the hell that meant. How can a heart beat backwards

Episode 61 part 4:

Not much of a change here. It just flows better now.

Episode 61 part 5:

Lots of changes to this one including an extra 1k words. This one might be worth a re-read. The fight is more of a struggle with Isaac struggling to do decent damage, but it ends the same just with a bit more team work and a few more shenanigans sprinkled throughout the chapter.

Episode 62 part 1:

This one had some of the wording changed to reflect on previous changes.

I'll be going back to working on episode 64