So here's the deal. I've written two parts for 62. 3 parts for 63 and have started on 64. With that said I feel as though some parts of Isaac’s fight with Squirmy need a bit of mending.
The biggest one being the stupid reveal with punishment aspects. It was kinda cool the first time against Cain but doing it again was kind of dumb.
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Like I've already done it so it's not really that surprising. This probably won't take long just a few changes here and there.
The other part that needs mending is Alice. I want to let her do a little more to help Issac. There was also some action that felt mid for me.
Once I get that done I'll finish up 64 and try to polish everything up.
Sincerely Dokeshi<3