My people, it has been a while since the last Looking Back chapter. I have attempted to change as much as possible since the last LBC and hope to do better for you guys going forward. So where are we then? Well, lanthim is off and doing his own thing. I have come to the conclusion that doing a time skip to ten years after as was suggested in a comment. Will be a good way to keep people guessing just how much of a badass he actually is.
While the fight between eldra and lanthim was really fun to write I felt when I first sent it out that it was going to flop really lifted my day with how positive the response was.
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So what will I do with the next arch? Even though I will be taking the story forward to around the time that lanthim will be returning I will concentrate on his younger siblings for the first few chapters so to give their characters some life. Also, I will need to build Leinea from the ground up so yeah all the fun.
Any suggestions and or thoughts on story progression are always welcome guys.
Oh yeah, I have started using an app called Grammarly to write my chapters and have taken the entire story through an entire reedit.
Enjoy guys