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Soaring Dragon Continent, Sky Serpent School

A man who seemed to be in his early twenties, is wobbling towards a large cave. His hair is black, and his face seems as if it has aged a lot, compared to others his age. This man has something different about him than the other disciples, he only has one arm. That’s right, this man is none other than Ye Chen, the inner disciple who tried to get Qiu Zhen to hand over his valuables.

Walking into the cave there are about ten individuals at the entrance, each one of them giving him a pitiful expression. It’s to be expected, they think Ye Chen has pissed off someone who was way stronger than him, and the price he paid was his arm. In the cave, there are around fifty people, some are wearing grey robes indicating they are inner disciples, while a few are wearing dark green robes. The people in dark green robes are the core disciples of the school, and this cave seemed to be some sort of hang out.

Ye Chen wobbled up to a man who was in his mid thirties, and kneeled. “Ye… Che… this fucking trash took my arm, and everything I owned. Also… my brothers, they were beaten half to death by him.”

Ye Che was seating on a stone chair, and his face made it seem as if he was pissed. “Pitiful, just fucking pitiful!” Ye Che got up off his stone chair and started kicking Ye Chen all over. “Fuck! You bring shame to the Ye Clan, and i’m even ashamed to even be related to you! If it wasn’t for your damn father being the one that saved my dad's life, then I would have tossed you out long ago.” Ye Che yelled at Ye Chen, before he walked back to his seat.

Ye Chen felt ashamed, the Ye Clan was his clan and it was a major clan. It might not be as powerful as the five grand clans in Fu kingdom, but it could be considered a rank above the Scarlet clan. Ye Chen’s father once saved Ye Che’s father's life when he was poisoned by a dragon bat demon beast. The poison was enough to make him start vomiting blood, but Ye Chen’s father gave him some medicine that lessened the effects, which ended up saving his life. In return, Ye Che’s father promised that his son would take care of Ye Chen’s son when they go to school.

The other inner and core disciples in the cave glared at Ye Chen, he was trash and they didn’t want to be seen with him. His cultivation is merely at the fourth Dao realm, he shouldn’t even be allowed to enter this place. The only reason he was allowed here is because of Ye Che. When they gaze at him and the shape his body is, they feel anger in their heart. He is bringing them shame, and they want him dead. Inside they felt as if the person he angered should have killed him, but they knew with Ye Che’s temperament that person would end up dead.

“Speak, who did this.” Ye Che’s voice carried the air of authority, that no one would disrespect.

“His name...Qiu Zhen…” Ye Chen could hardly stand to say Qiu Zhen’s name, this was the person who put him in such a shape and yet here he is being humiliated. Ye Chen can only swallow the humiliation, because he knows that Qiu Zhen will face a fate worse than death.

“Qiu Zhen...Qiu Zhen..” Ye Che said the name a few times, but nothing came to mind. “Never heard of him, what's his cultivation?”

“This…” Ye Chen was afraid to speak, if he told Ye Che that his cultivation was only at the ninth Qi realm, then he felt as if Ye Che would kill him. Ye Chen didn’t want to die, but he knew that lying wasn’t going to turn out well for him either.

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Glaring at Ye Chen, Ye Che felt as if he was trying to hide something. Ye Che opened his palm and aimed it at Ye Chen. Boom! Ye Chen was tossed back landing against the cave wall. “Fucking trash, I asked for his cultivation! Now Speak!”

Ye Chen started coughing up a mouthful of blood. Slowly the words started to come out of his mouth, but it was low hardly anyone could hear it. Ye Che aimed his palm at Ye Chen again, but Ye Chen spoke up louder. “N-ninth Qi realm!”

“What!? Lies, you dare lie to me!”

Ye Chen started kowtowing over and over, he knew what would happen if Ye Che got angry. “N-no, he’s really at the ninth Qi realm.”

Ye Che clenched the armrest of the stone chair, and cracking sounds were heard. “Fuck! Not only do you bring the clan and me shame, you give our Death Blood faction no face. Leave! Now!!”

In the Sky Serpent school, when you are an outer disciple you can live your life peacefully most of the time. However inner disciples and core disciples don’t, they are at constant feud with each other. Many inner disciples have banded together with core disciples to start a faction, and with those factions come protection. Ye Chen is in the Death Blood faction, and the leader is Ye Che who is of much higher cultivation than him.

The Death Blood faction is well known in the school, they only accept ruthless males, who have a cultivation at the sixth dao realm or higher. The Death Blood faction has been in many faction wars with others, and have ranked up many times, causing fear in others.

While the Death Blood faction might not be in the top ten of all factions, it is still high rankings, and for a member of theirs to lose to a mere ninth Qi realm cultivation is like a huge slap in the face. When Ye Chen was walking out, the looks of the other members seemed as if they all wanted him dead.

Ye Che was gritting his teeth, someone he never heard of before and only had a cultivation at the ninth Qi realm just took a giant piss all over his faction. “Ye Fa, go teach that Qiu Zhen a lesson. Make sure to cut off both his arms and legs, and burn his house down.”

A male who seemed to be in his mid twenties walked forward and saluted Ye Che. “Hehehe, no worries elder brother, this Qiu Zhen won’t survive the night.”

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Time passed and soon most of the inner disciples were in their room sleeping or cultivating. In Qiu Zhen’s room, Qiu Zhen was absorbing all the demon cores he has obtained during the exam. The only one he hasn’t started to absorb yet is the one from the three headed jade serpent. Boom!

Qiu Zhen just had a breakthrough after absorbing all the qi essence in the demon cores he had, each one was at the sixth-eighth Qi realm. The qi in his body almost exploded before it dispersed, his breakthrough now put him at the fifth Dao realm. “Not bad, not bad at all.”

Qiu Zhen looked around, and he didn’t feel any cultivators coming so he pulled out his three headed jade serpent demon core. Holding the core in his hand, he closed his eye’s and started to absorb the essence.

Boom!

Three holes appeared on his roof, and three figures appeared. All three men were dressed in grey robes, one of the men came forward and glared at Qiu Zhen. “Qiu Zhen I take it….”

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Who could be knocking at the door, or you know... the through the roof....