Hi hi!

Here are somethings I would like you to have an idea before jump into the story.

I'm a Chinese writer since twelve, and I do publish some of my works on the internet, and some of my short stories manage to be accepted for newspaper's publishment (just a very small section, and I haven't submit anything to the newspaper since few years ago).

I'm thinking of diving into the world of English writing to improve my skills in writing, but the way of Chinese writing is very different from English writing, I'm struggled and made a pretty slow progression, even with the help of ChatGPT to fix my grammars and stuff.

Reading on Amazon or a pirate site? This novel is from Royal Road. Support the author by reading it there.

But I do see some improvements though! Boy I was so glad to see my improvement, and I can't wait to show it somewhere!

So here is a ChatGPT proofreaded story, and I choose to post it here and Wattpad (since I had an account over there, might as well just post it on both side)

This is a story rewritten from my previously Chinese novel; I write it all again based on the Chinese version, and not translating it, so some word choice are different, some paragraph was omited and something would be added, but the meaning should somehow be the same.

I hope one day I could write my content freely, and could confidently say "I don't need an AI to help fixing my writing anymore!"

Let's see how it goes. If everything goes well, I might rewrite another story of mine, and start thinking a new story start from scratch in English. [OvO]