It looks like I'm diving fully into the SLH rewrite because I'm already fifteen chapters in with no intention of slowing down. I'm planning on releasing the rewrite as a separate series, so you won't have to worry about the old SLH coming down or anything, but since that is the case, I'm tossing around the idea of changing the title, to keep the two separate, and I'm more than willing to take suggestions, so let me know if you have any ideas.

Also, I'm looking at a new book description (I've been informed my old one sucks) and I have a few attempts I'd appreciate some feedback on.

Attempt A:

In the beginning, God created the Four. Space to contain all of existence, Body to give existence physicality, Soul to give it will, and Spirit to give it life. From the Four all Worlds were formed, and without them, no World could exist. But the Four did not truly exist themselves, for none of the Four could live without the others. A space without physicality, will, and life is a void, and life, will, and physicality cannot exist without space. And so the Multiverse grew without them, yet because of them. But the Multiverse is a place of endless possibilities, and one day, something changed. The Four were born. They existed. They could grow. And soon the Multiverse will learn that creation and destruction go hand in hand. That Building Blocks of Creation is simply another name for the Horsemen of the Apocalypse.

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Attempt B:

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There are stories about heroes. This isn't one of them. There are stories about villains. This isn't one of those either. No, this is a story about people. Four people, to be specific. Four people who want what everyone wants. A place to call their own and friends and family to share it with. To exist and experience life in all its many stages, and in the end, to look back at all they've accomplished and feel satisfied. It isn't their fault they were born as avatars of the four concepts that allow all of reality to exist. They just couldn't ignore what they could do, and did what they could. How were they supposed to know it'd lead to the Apocalypse? It isn't like this crap came with a user manual.

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Attempt C:

Chris grew up knowing he was going to die, but when he did, he was surprised to find it wasn't the end.

Greg was just sitting in class when everything went dark and he awoke to a destroyed world with strange new abilities.

Thomas was just thinking he should get in better shape when a strange window appeared in his vision displaying a simple task.

Andrew was born a Beast, a being with abilities far beyond the average person, yet when a Hunting trip goes wrong, he begins to realize there's something more to what he is, something beyond the norm for even a Beast.

These were the beginnings of the four individuals who would become the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse. Beings who would consume the Multiverse, not for power or greed, but because the Multiverse is diseased, and sometimes when things get bad enough, all you can do is tear it all down and start again.

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Let me know what you guys think, and vote for whichever you like best in the poll below.