Hi everyone, it's been a while since I've posted here, and for good reason, I've been editing the chapters going forward, along with my other new series I've been working on (progression fantasy, cultivation, shameless advertising ADAMATH | Royal Road). first of all, like always, I wanted to say a big thank you to you all, criticisms and love alike, it's played a vital factor in helping me grow as a writer and I can't help but be grateful to you all. I wanted to address some issues here about the book I feel people might be confused a bit about.
1) IT'S NOT A SERIAL:
some of the complaints I've gotten both from private messages and on my Patreon is the abrupt way readers feel I'm trying to close the story, I can't stress it enough that I wasn't aiming for an over the long serial of a thousand chapters and more. it's not meant to be some long journey that branches off into so many subplots that three years from now I'm still writing. I mean, it's possible, but there was a clear goal from the beginning for me, and Moyo's growth had been tailored towards it, in this, I apologize profusely to those who thought so.
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2) PLOT:
this is a bit funny, some of my readers here (who I can't repeat how grateful I am to you all) feel I tailored the plot to some of the views of the readers, I want to clear that line of thought here and no. That wasn't remotely the case, some may or may not have guessed where it would lead, but whatever happened to whatever characters in the book was strictly my outline, especially the whole harem (wonder where that thought came from, lol)
3) LITRPG
as I grew while writing this book, I realized how I preferred light litrpg and not the heavy game world system some of my readers preferred, the archailect system was meant to simply be a crutch, one that could later be modified (without going into spoilers, lol). I apologize profusely when it comes to that.
4) GRAMMAR:
finally this, the bane of my writing, lol, I've taken your advice, along with working with it in my new book, grammarly as well, it's been a journey, and looking back at early chapters, yup, I can see them.
All in all, chapters will resume today, if you want to read ahead, check my Patreon, the chapters are free there, thank you!.