Hi everyone!
When doing review swaps and reaching out to others, I've received two reoccurring issues:
One: The grammar. I fixed most of it. There are probably little spelling mistakes that my eyes are overlooking, but I will crack them down and fix 'em. That's a promise.
Two: Disconnection between the MC. Originally, I planned on posting the Jill's backstory around the mid--twenties, and I did. But after receiving constructive criticism from multiple people, I've decided to put Jill's backstory much earlier. I wanted to keep it mysterious in way, but you as the reader need some information. So that's why it looks weird if you look at the "date added" by the chapter. Just wanting to point that out.
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Her backstory with Raphtalia are in chapters 8, 9 and 10. If you haven't read those, I highly suggest that you do. You'll understand her motives much better.
I apologize for the inconvenience. I should've planned better before posting. But hey, we learn as we go.
I hope you guys continue to enjoy the story! Have a good rest of your day and stay safe.