Comment in the gdocs

this is where I will post links to subject to change posts that still need points of view on

most will change in some ways some will be very different from what is seen here

If you notice something in the gdocs that is confusing or needs clarification please leave a comment

Reading on this site? This novel is published elsewhere. Support the author by seeking out the original.

chapter 4-complete just needs proof reading and to make sure it is not confusing.

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