AFTERWORD
Hey, kentusrpg here. Thanks for sticking around with this Extra Novel, I really wanted to do that, as it serves as a constructive break and will make things easier starting with volume 7. As I have written parts of volume 6 parallel to this, I've decided to not make too many direct references between the two of them. Well, Rine will at least start her wizard-training in volume 6.
My plan was to write much less here, but the story about the superfriends just got bloated and bloated, and I've decided to make it more concrete and firm, to make stuff bigger on the scale, as it also serves the rest of the story around them and the general setting. However, after writing down this monster, I've decided to not repeat the same mistake.
Now to the chapters themselves:
Superfriends: They're surprisingly popular and important to the story, but while I had many notes, I needed to flesh them out, and I needed to revise some passages multiple times to get the right tone with the characters, without spoiling too much of what to come. Their story is about growth, similar to the story concerning Kenta's family, in this particular piece, it's about overcoming sadness and the feeling of inadequacy, something everyone needs to get through regularly.
Like I said, this story became bloated. It was supposed to be shorter, but I had important characters to treat, and I wanted to do them justice, and not just put there, how awesome Masahiko can be.
True Heroes: Lent and Star (formerly known as Yoshimura and Hoshibashi) are interesting characters in their own right, as they can be really powerful, but still lack the means to showcase their true strength. In Aroahenn, they were pretty messed up before their powerboost, here neither their tactics nor their gear could stand the Undead Army, though they'll fight in-between volumes against it to get stronger and stronger.
I like the ooaks, the orc-like people. They're a fun bunch, they just love roughhousing and are such an enjoyable bunch, if you're their friend. If not, they can be quite vicious.
Teachers: Ah, this one... good thing that I've written volume 5's Extra before finishing the story, as I could continue it there. I really hope, that I haven't become an adult like those teachers, because they're quite pathetic in their own rights, but maybe they'll redeem themselves sooner or later. Taniguchi got hold on the wrong end of the stick while talking with the king, Heinrich von Stolzherz is a different kind of adult and ruler than people may suspect. Well, he is Rine's father, so I wanted to make them strangely similar, but actually quite different at the same time.
Have anyone figured out what Saegusa-sensei might have realized? Just curious.
A new poll, this time we're looking for the best husband. Be it for yourself, a friend, a sibling or the like. Who do you think would make the best husband?
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The easy ones (no to little effort put into it and you remain anonymous):
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2.) Become a Follower/Favorite. If you aren’t following the story via the Follower-option, consider doing so. Just go to the fiction page and choose “Add to your Bookshelf” on the right side. This not only boosts my confidence, but the number of Followers and Favorites is also visible for everyone on RRL.
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With the new version of RRL, up-/downvoting became a bit of a hassle (because the page reloads every time), but I'd appreciate it if you do it nonetheless.
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1.) Write a comment. I really like to read your comments, I'm easily pleased by praise, I'll think about actual critique which is usable, and I like to converse with my readers in general. Even if you spot a typo, everything is fine. As long as you don't write stuff like "I hate your guts," "your story is full of shit," and "I don't like your MC," this is not really helpful. I can deal with critique, but I need reasons, I need personal outlooks, I need examples why something feels wrong.
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The next volume will bring us into new lands, and we'll say hello to an old acquaintance. As the Crusaders are in Ohlbrücken, Kenta and his family will need to look for another way to cross the river, if they want to get to Zethtrin.
It will be out in a month or so. Have finally a PR again and hope it's fully ready for a weekly release schedule.
Until then, have a good time