AFTERWORD
Hey there, kentusrpg here. And yes, we got through the fifth volume. There is much and almost nothing to say, some people may feel betrayed for the climax again, but it's intentional. In this volume are no big fights, small skirmishes here and there, but the magnitude has lessened due to the circumstances. So the climax this time is more about the chase.
A lot is going on regarding character development here, Kenta has a genuine, not mean smile, for the first time. The girls feel the first conflicts towards each other, something which happens. It's rather small and easily solved after speaking with each other. Like many conflicts in real life. But a significant part of it is the natures of Rine and Ara'ainn because they're honest and don't see the need to hide their thoughts. Even though they differ otherwise.
This time we also got a bit more about the curse. It's actually a marriage! But what Kenta and Kyou don't know is the difference between a marriage in their homeworld and a marriage in the fantasy world. Ara'ainn doesn't either, as 'marriage' was something she learned after being transported.
There is much more to it in the fantasy-world than what we refer to as marriage in our world.
I also had the opportunity to go more into details regarding the oni. She doesn't have a real name, she was never named officially. Even the name of her false identity, Ogra, is just a fake name.
By the way, Ogra is coming from ogro, the Spanish word for ogre, which is the most direct translation from the Japanese oni.
I feel like I missed going into details regarding the barbarians, but there just seemed no point to give a real proper explanation without messing up with the flow. To cut it short: Barbarians are human warrior nomads, who travel through different countries and act like bandits often. They are terrifying strong, so strong that people started to refer to simple cultures as savages in general, while “barbarians” got somewhat patented.
One of the reason is that barbarians have a lot of non-heroes who learn combat-[Skills]. While most soldiers will learn some eventually, the barbarians take it to another level. With such a high bar for seasoned warriors, it's hard to fight them, especially since they're so mobile. Good thing there are only a few tribes. Otherwise, they could most likely run over any country... well, sometimes they do. Not to conquer, but to raid. The people of the Wildlands are scared of them for a good reason.
If you're asking: What is with Masahiko and his friends, and what about Hoshibashi and Yoshimura, the other heroes?
Well, both of them get covered in volume 5.5, in addition to the non-combatant heroes of Feuerberg. I decided to put it in an extra volume, because it's interesting/important enough to keep up to date, and it just feels wrong to have too many side-characters doing something entirely else in a regular volume.
I also needed a bit of a break, writing something else, so this is like a compromise. Writing it put me in a good mood, and I'm back on track with the main story. So first the break, then the extra volume, then a little break again, then volume 6! The first time Kenta has to deal with revenge...
As we know that the curse is an actual marriage in this world, there is another poll. Who do you think has the best Wife Power of them all? Also included the oni and the Crusader based on the comments of some. For those more interested in men, I'll include something at another time, as I think it'd be better to make that one, after I've re-introduced some of the other male characters. Don't worry though, you can comment about who the best husband would be right now!
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I hope to have you again in volume 5.5!