That is the end of volume three!

Finally...it was a rather long volume than my first and second volume.

I've reflected on advice given at the survey on volume 2 and tried to improve the quality of my story, what do you think?

Questions:

(1 being the worst, 5 being the best)

1. How was the plot in volume 3? (1 to 5)

2. Who is your favourite character in volume 3?

3. Is the pace comfortable? or too fast/slow/unstable.

4. I tried changing my style of writing a little bit to incorporate more descriptive writing. How would you rate it? (1 to 5)

5. How is the world building in this volume? (1 to 5)

6. What other suggestions do you have?

Thank you very much for reading this far and for your responses!

Here are some bonuses:

You could be reading stolen content. Head to Royal Road for the genuine story.

Female Samuel:

Female Samuel: [https://img.wattpad.com/691a737572e36dc7ec6b2015d328bbe77d83afc5/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f546f545851687466394d66475a773d3d2d313339323332353036372e3137393064326536636565356334653938333330343333373038352e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280]

[https://img.wattpad.com/f494caa3eb2beb7b827f8099853a1d786c145bc8/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f625f42466c2d6554374e6f334a513d3d2d313339323332353036372e313739306431396335666335313933353735373039353139313638302e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280]

Lena in a white dress:

Lena in a white dress: [https://img.wattpad.com/c7192111660570a9d434b0ca2bf0368c7033777c/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f765235534e4c56796a376c6745673d3d2d313339323332353036372e313739306432333064373362623163333534333231353630393035302e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280]

Rosy:

Rosy: [https://img.wattpad.com/7c3237bf5d158614ccbb0bf0db8c0408d0a79bb3/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f4e526341476152435768496e55513d3d2d313339323332353036372e313739306432373462636662363231653631363332333430303634322e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280]

[https://img.wattpad.com/53f51725f00b2af6abfd353aa8728631ba0bba6f/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f7363306c787750347a635a726e513d3d2d313339323332353036372e313739306432373566323931353731643839353231323230303035302e706e67?s=fit&w=1280&h=1280]

Lastly, the story will go on a hiatus for one and a half months due to academic examinations. Thank you for the support and understanding!