Anyone who listens to System a down and got the title joke gets 1.5 reader points

I have a couple questions I would like to get answered.

Who's gonna answer them?

Glad you asked, person who is gonna answer them. I like words and letters. The more there is, the happier I'll be. But If you're not good with your words, I'll begrudgingly accept a 1-5 rating. Answer as many or as little (0 is not little, you scum. At least 0.1) as you like

Be reminded that though Jack is an S, I am, as an author, an(why did I use an instead of a? Idk it sounds better) M, so use the sharp end of the whip.

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0: Though I'm definitely gonna fill in that time skip at chapter 13, I'm questioning whether I should go back and edit the other chapters to hint at Jack's condition, or whether I should wait until the end of the story and editing it majorly before publishing it somewhere nice. I'm leaning towards the latter.

1. How is the writing style?

2. How was the first story arc (Null Online)?

3. How was the second arc (Before Null Online)?

4. How is the story overall?

5. How do(did) you like Raven?

6. How do you like Jack(s)?

 7. Do you feel that all life is meaningless grind yet?

8. Please use your letters for this one: What can I improve on? What would you like to see more of?

9. Anything else?

So as you've noticed, I have a lil issue. I'm not sure what format I should use for the two arcs, whether in chronicle order or cut him like it is currently. Keep in mind because there is a lack of action for the second arc, so I'm not sure if that will scare away the reader population. So, write and vote away!

Plz.