Thought of Sam is in red. Guys comment on what the story is lacking. Although I think that i have improved, compared to my earlier writing. Comment and advice so that i can further improve.
Sal returned and he had found the lair of wolves, Sam took out two guns from the inventory and equipped it with silencer. He headed cautiously towards the west, after walking for few minutes he heard sound from the front so he used x-ray vision to see, there were three grey colored wolves behind the tree so he quickly went forward and shot them. The wolves died and others were also not alerted, Sam killed around 15 wolves until he reached the lair of the king. Sam didn’t have to go inside as the king wolf itself came out and there were four wolves with it. Sam identified all of them.
King wolf
HP: 1200/1200
MP: 1200/1200
Attack: 250
Skill: It can use the element wind and increase its speed by 60%, increases packs stats by 10.
Alpha Wolf
HP; 800/800
MP: 800/800
Attack: 180
Skill: It can use wind element to increase its speed by 40%.Increases packs stats by 4.
The other three were also alpha wolves and could use the wind property. These were the toughest opponent Sam had to face so he took Ak-47 from the inventory; the wolves were also ready to pounce at Sam. Sam fired but the wolves were too quick and the bullets didn’t hit them, he was surrounded from all sides. The 5 wolves howled and it created a pressure which didn’t let Sam move.
“Fuck, I can’t move my body.”
Sam tried identifying their skill.
Skill: Wind pressure
The enemy that is trapped in the formation can’t move. The only way to recover is to disrupt the formation.
He couldn’t move and the king wolf was approaching towards him; he used the summoning skill called the shadow wolf. The shadow wolf pounced at the king but it was easily defeated and thrown aside. A wolf stopped and engaged against the shadow wolf whereas the three wolves formed a triangle position and howled; it again created a pressure and Sam couldn’t move his body although it was weaker than earlier. He looked at his skill list and couldn’t find any helpful skill, although Sam hadn’t trained this skill he decided to use it to create a chance.
ROARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!
Sam used the beast roar; a loud roar was heard throughout the jungle. The three wolves were stunned but the king wasn’t but it was all that Sam needed. He fired at the three wolves killing them, the fourth wolf that was fighting with the shadow wolf was also stunned and it was defeated. The shadow wolf returned back to the shadow and only the king and Sam were remaining.
“Come let’s see what you can do.”
Sam took out the blood spear and was ready for the battle, the wolf snorted and jumped at Sam. Sam threw the spear at the wolf and took out two pistols; he fired and finished the entire magazine. The wolf had wounds all over the body, looking at the state of the wolf Sam laughed loudly.
Sam went toward the wolf and said, “Idiot, did you really think I would fight with the spear?”
The wolf was losing HP very quickly and it could die any moment, after few seconds the wolf died.
Master task is complete.
Got Exp 2000 and Money 5000$
Got items a ring and skill book.
He kept the items in the inventory and went inside the cave to check if there is anything useful, inside there were few wolves and babies. They were afraid of Sam so they were hiding in a corner, he didn’t find anything useful so he left the cave.
He checked the ring and the skill book.
Luck ring.
Increases the luck of user by 5.
Skill book (Flash step)
A skill that allows the user to create the images of himself to confuse the enemy.
He wore the ring and learned the skill. The exp that he gained was enormous and he leveled up twice reaching level 10. He felt more powerful after reaching level 10.
“Lilly, why does my body feel different?” Sam was puzzled
Master you should check your stats to know that. The system has given you a gift for reaching lvl 10.
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Sam quickly checked his stats.
HP: 700/700
MP: 700/700
Stamina: 520/520
Str: 27
Agi: 25
Int: 25
Wis: 8
End: 10
Luck: 12 (5)
Vit: 7
Exp: 1000/720
Lvl: 10
Remaining Points: 10
“Hmmm!! That is why I am feeling strong and I still have 10 points to spend looks like I can be more powerful”
Sam was truly happy, now he can return back and have his revenge. He sat down in front of the cave and rested, after some time a loud roar was heard from the forest.
Master run!!!!
Sam stood from the ground and said, “Run why?”
Master looks like that your roar earlier provoked the king of jungle and now it is coming to hunt you.
“What hunt me?”
He wasn’t willing to run but the sound came closer and he was scared so he ran toward the direction of hut.
Master you can’t return back, you should leave the forest. The king is very strong and it will kill you if you stay in the jungle.
Although Sam didn’t want to leave he had no choice so he ran away from the jungle. After running for few hours he was tired but he was still inside the jungle, he could hear the roar of the beast and he knew that the beast was nearing him. He used the skill glide and limit break and ran as fast as he could. After running for about five minutes he finally came out of the forest and entered a village, he sighed with relief and went towards a nearby area to sit. He was really tired from the entire running and using limit break made it much worse, he laid down on the ground to recover. Village areas have few people so no one noticed the arrival of Sam; he rested for few minutes and was barely able to move. He got up and headed inside the village, before entering he changed his appearance to that of Xu.
Sam saw very few people in the village and after walking few minutes he saw a lodge. He booked a room and after that he slept, Sam was awoken by the knock in his door. He was called for dinner, he took a bath went to have dinner. His appearance was old so most of the people didn’t bother looking at him; he sat down near the window.
The owner approached him and asked, “Sir you look new in this area.”
“Yes I am. Is there a problem?”
“Of course there isn’t but the place you are sitting has been booked so please sit in another table.” The owner had a worried look.
Sam didn’t want to make things difficult so he sat at another table. After few minute foods were served and Sam ate two fillings, he tasted a decent meal after a month. Two men came and sat at the window side, something was off about them so Sam used the identify skill.
Name: James Jones
HP: 500/500
MP: 500/500
Str: 18
Agi: 15
Lvl: 6
Skill: Null
F ranked killer from the killer organization.
Name: Will Jackson
HP: 800/800
MP: 800/800
Str: 22
Agi: 20
Lvl: 8
Skill: night vision
F ranked killer from the killer organization.
Sam smiled while looking at them.
I finally have a chance to test my skill against human.