For those wondering what happend, I deleted chapter 3 and 4 and fuse them with 1 and 2, since they really were 2 short. I also Added a title  and a prev next and main menu at the end of each chapter.

Also, I would apreciate if you guys review, like the reviews alredy done or tell me in the coments what is wrong so i have a better idea of the weak points of the story

This tale has been unlawfully lifted from Royal Road. If you spot it on Amazon, please report it.

Finally, there is also a wordpress if you prefer to read it there instead of royal road, since I usually update the 2 at the same time

https://theblacksheepprince.wordpress.com/