I edited Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 a bit, so feel free to check it out if you want. I didn't change any plot, I just added a few more thoughts and details. This only applies to those who read the Chapters on 1/24/2016 Pacific Time.

You could be reading stolen content. Head to the original site for the genuine story.

Other than that, if you have any thoughts feel free to comment. I may not be a writer, but I'm trying to improve my writing skills and have fun.