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"A Vuraskal… Ronan, Farren—engage it head-on and keep its attention! Althea, attack from range and focus on weak spots. Look for an opening to finish it off! Sela, support Althea and strike up close when you can. If needed, assist Ronan and Farren!" Orin commands, his voice sharp and decisive.
Within seconds, the group springs into action. Orin positions himself at the rear, his eyes scanning the battlefield for any signs of third-party threats or shifts in the Vuraskal's behavior.
Just as the team closes in on the beast, Orin calls out one final command, his tone cutting through the chaos. "Avoid its wings and tail—if they hit you, it'll be fatal!"
Ronan and Farren swiftly approach the beast head-on, their agility matching each other's movements, as if perfectly in sync. Ronan reaches for the daggers at his waist-belt, flipping them in his grip until the blades point backward, their edges gleaming as he charges forward.
At his side, Farren moves with deliberate precision. His hands rest briefly on the hilts of his two one-handed swords, their stunning designs immediately catching the eye. The intricate craftsmanship of the blades speaks to the care he has for them, each detail reflecting his dedication. With a smooth motion, he draws the swords from their sheaths, the sound of steel cutting through the air as he readies himself to attack.
Althea ascends gracefully into the air, carried by a swirling current of wind that lifts her effortlessly off the ground. Hovering above the trees, she glides into position, her movements fluid and precise. Slowly, she draws her staff forward, its polished surface glinting faintly in the dappled light.
Her sharp gaze sweeps across the battlefield, taking in the unfolding chaos below. Though her expression is serious, she floats midair with an almost ethereal calm, unburdened by even a hint of worry. Her focus shifts frequently to the figure below—Sela. Althea's watchful eyes linger on the girl, as though silently guarding her from above while remaining attuned to the beast's every move.
Sela surges into the fray, her body crackling with lightning as she propels herself forward with startling agility. Her movements are so swift, they blur against the air, flickering like a phantom as if she's on the verge of unleashing her full lightning speed—but she holds back, teetering on the edge of her true potential, as though now isn't the moment to reveal it.
Her sharp eyes dart across the battlefield, scanning Althea, Ronan, Farren, and the beast with calculated precision. She positions herself in midair, hovering with an electric grace, her hand outstretched and aimed directly at the monster. She waits, poised to cast her spell, her entire stance a balance of tension and readiness, anticipating the signal to strike.
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The Vuraskal's claws, long and razor-sharp, cut through the air as they lunge toward Ronan. They seem unstoppable, closing the distance in an instant—but just before they strike, a sharp metallic ring vibrates through the battlefield. Ronan's dagger meets the beast's claw with perfect precision, deflecting its deadly point in a brilliant parry.
But that's only the beginning. As the beast recoils slightly, Ronan ducks under its follow-up swipe and surges forward, his movements a blur of calculated agility. He sidesteps the next strike, slipping past the massive claw to close the gap. With deadly precision, he drives his dagger into the Vuraskal's flesh, sinking the blade deep into its scaled hide.
Not stopping there, Ronan drags the blade upward, carving a jagged wound along the creature's limb. His movements are swift and seamless as he races up the Vuraskal's leg, each step precise and controlled. From a distance, it almost appears as though he's flying, but in reality, it's his mastery of movement—his perfect balance and unwavering focus—that allows him to scale the beast.
With a blade in hand, he tears through the Vuraskal's tough hide, exposing vivid orange veins pulsing beneath the surface. Each slice is deliberate, and as his blade severs one of the veins, the creature's blood bursts forth in a scalding gush, the thick, steaming liquid pooling beneath them.
Climbing the 20-foot beast, Ronan propels himself upward with a roll-like movement, flipping effortlessly over to its neck, his blade still embedded deep in its flesh. Chanting a spell under his breath, the searing steam from the beast's blood swirls and clings to his weapon. Suddenly, flames ignite along the blade, their intense heat burning into the Vuraskal's flesh. The fire spreads beneath its thick scales, cracking and blackening them as though they might burst away from the creature at any moment.
Yet, even as the flames devour its flesh, the beast begins to heal. The wounds Ronan had carved into its body moments ago seal themselves shut with alarming speed. A powerful burst of hot air rushes into the open gashes, knitting the flesh back together until no trace of injury remains. It was as though the beast had never been harmed, save for the evidence left behind: blood pooling on the ground, staining Ronan's blade, and spattering its still-pristine scales.
But Ronan didn't even glance at the beast's rapidly healing wounds—he kept on attacking with unwavering confidence, a grin stretching across his face as though he were truly enjoying himself. Or perhaps his amusement didn't come from the fight itself. His gaze drifted upward, drawn to the female figure hovering mid-air. Althea, her sharp eyes locked onto him, stood like a vision amidst the swirling wind, her long, elegant skirt flowing with the current. Her attention on him seemed to boost his spirits—or, at the very least, his amusement.
As he moved, his gaze lingered a moment too long, the mischievous spark in his eyes unmistakable. He tilted his head slightly, clearly more interested in sneaking a peek beneath her billowing skirt than focusing on the battle at hand. For a moment, it wasn't the Vuraskal that captivated him, but the dance of the wind around Althea.
Then, the beast erupted into motion. Its powerful wings, the very ones Orin had warned them about, sliced through the air with a force that sent shockwaves across the battlefield. The deafening rush jolted Ronan back to reality, snapping his attention away. The Vuraskal's tail followed suit, lashing through the air with lethal precision.
Ronan barely had time to react. The clawed wing brushed close enough to ruffle his hair, a warning of how narrowly he'd escaped. His reckless nature—his distraction—left him perilously close to disaster. Though he grinned as if unfazed, the truth was clear: one more slip, and he wouldn't be able to dodge the next strike.
Ronan fought for fun—that much was obvious. Reckless, daring, and always with a hint of mischief, he fought as though the thrill itself were his true goal. Even in battle, his focus strayed, chasing amusement and the attention of the lady's around him.
Just when it seemed like Ronan was cornered, Farren burst into the fray, his swords slicing clean through a significant portion of the Vuraskal's wing. The beast recoiled, retreating the damaged wing to recover, buying Ronan a precious moment.
"Focus on the battle," Farren called out, his tone laced with a teasing confidence. "You wouldn't want me stealing the spotlight after this fight, would you?" He flashed Ronan a cocky grin before charging back into the action, his movements deliberate and sure as he prepared for his next strike.
Ronan, unshaken by Farren's jab, smirked as he reached for two fresh daggers from his belt. Flipping one over so it pointed backward, he twirled it with unnecessary flair—clearly for show, if I had to guess. With renewed focus, he charged forward, aiming directly for the beast's head.
His blade slashed across the Vuraskal's neck, carving a deep mark into its flesh. Wasting no time, he hurled the backward-pointing dagger with pinpoint precision, the blade embedding itself in the beast's jaw. The dagger struck true, jamming the jaw shut and momentarily trapping the beast's ability to bite.
With the Vuraskal stunned, Ronan drew another dagger, his target now the beast's vulnerable eyes. Moving with practiced speed, he drove the blade through both eyes, leaving the creature blinded—for now. He knew the eyes would regenerate eventually, but it would buy his team critical time.
Finished with his distraction, Ronan let himself drop to the ground, his descent controlled and calculated. Landing lightly on his feet, he transitioned into a ready stance, daggers poised in his hands. However, as soon as he steadied himself, his gaze shifted upward—not to the beast, but to the woman above. With a smirk tugging at his lips, he took a moment to appreciate the "ideal" perspective the battle had now granted him, his priorities clearly skewed toward a view that had little to do with strategy.
3
His twin black blades cut cleanly through the rapidly regenerating scales, each strike poised to parry incoming attacks while simultaneously slicing through the Vuraskal's tough hide. A true master of the sword, Farren's every movement radiates precision and discipline. In his eyes, it's evident that he values the art of swordsmanship, though he carries its rules lightly—his strikes smooth and fluid, yet so powerful they sever even the hardened edges of the beast's claws. It's as though his very soul flows through the blades, turning every swing into a dance of destructive grace.
Farren's feet move in perfect rhythm with his swords, his movements almost elegant—almost. The illusion is shattered by his expression, his face twisted into a mix of unrestrained glee and fury as he shouts, curses, and taunts the massive creature.
"You fat, overgrown reptile! Is that all you've got, huh? Come on! Hit me! Hurt me! Give me a real fight!" His grin stretches wide, wild and feral, as he hurls insult after insult at the beast. Despite his harsh words, his blades move with deadly precision, striking with the same smoothness and power as before.
"Regenerating? Is that your big trick? Pathetic! You're huge—surely you can do better!"
Dodging the vicious swipes of the Vuraskal's claws, Farren darts up the beast's back, each step light yet deliberate. He moves so quickly that in mere moments, he's standing atop the creature's exposed spine—a vantage point left completely unguarded. But then, just as it seems he's fully engrossed in the fight, his attention shifts.
"Hey! Ronan!" he yells, his voice carrying across the battlefield, loud and clear.
On the ground, amidst the chaos of clashing metal and gnashing claws, Ronan shouts back, "Yeah? What is it now?"
Grinning wider, Farren calls down, "Let's take out this ugly bastard's wings! Let's show this thing what fun really looks like!" His words hang in the air, the challenge thick with confidence.
Ronan, ever the opportunist, doesn't miss a beat. In one fluid motion, he hurls a dagger upward, the blade hurtling through the air with deadly precision. It pierces the Vuraskal's wing, landing alarmingly close to Farren, who only narrowly sidesteps it. The beast, however, seems utterly unfazed by the dagger embedded in its wing—its thick hide and relentless regeneration make it nearly impervious to such minor wounds.
The real target wasn't the beast—it was Farren's attention. The thrown dagger serves as a sharp reminder to stay focused, catching Farren's eye as Ronan smirks below.
Snapping back into action, Farren braces himself as the Vuraskal's massive wing lashes out. The beast's raw strength presses against him like a storm, but Farren's twin blades meet the attack head-on. Gritting his teeth, he holds his ground, both swords locked in place against the crushing force of the wing.
Then, with a quick pivot, he releases one sword from the block, shifting his stance low. In one clean, devastating strike, he slices through the tip of the beast's wing with the freed blade, severing it cleanly.
The next moment, Farren broke free from the clash, his swords ready for another strike. Beside him, Ronan stood poised, daggers at the ready, waiting for Farren's signal. With a brief nod, the two burst away from the beast's back in unison, launching themselves toward its wings—the vulnerable center of its back.
Farren's blade sliced cleanly along the fleshy side of one wing, severing the glowing veins that pulsed beneath its scaled surface. Each stroke ripped through the vibrant pathways, causing them to burst in an explosion of vivid orange blood that sprayed across the battlefield.
But danger came fast from behind. The Vuraskal's tail—a wicked appendage lined with razor-sharp spikes—pierced the air with deadly speed, hurtling toward Farren like a diving bird of prey.
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At the same time, two simultaneous attacks came from the wings on either side. One wing recoiled violently after a sudden, vibrating impact—a jagged stone projectile had struck clean through its delicate membrane, leaving behind a gaping wound. This injury, unlike the others, did not regenerate immediately. The healing process faltered, giving Farren and Ronan a critical opening to focus on the incoming strikes from the opposite wing and the tail's relentless assault.
Farren, locking eyes with the diving tail, grinned mischievously and called out to Ronan, "Hey, Ronan, I bet I can take down the tail before you finish off that wing!" Without waiting for a reply, he charged forward, swords gleaming in the dim light.
The tail, a deadly whip of muscle and sharpened spikes, came hurtling toward him with unstoppable force. Farren didn't falter. He angled one blade, its tip grazing along the edge of the tail's razor-sharp spike. With expert precision, he let the momentum guide him, sliding his blade down the length of the spike just before it could impale him. The tail's force worked against the beast itself, the sharp point tearing into its own scales as Farren twisted away.
As the tail slammed downward, Farren surged upward, using the motion to his advantage. His blade traced the curve of the tail's tip, carving into the thick flesh with calculated force. Reaching higher along the tail's length, he drove his sword deeper, grinding it through layers of dense muscle and sinew.
With a swift, decisive motion, Farren dragged his blade free and spun mid-air. His right-handed sword came down in a powerful arc, the strike fueled by both precision and strength. The blade cleaved cleanly through the tail, severing it completely. The detached section plummeted to the ground with a sickening thud, accompanied by a massive spray of hot, steaming blood that splattered across the battlefield.
Farren landed gracefully, his expression a blend of triumph and mischief as he flicked the blood from his blades with a casual flourish.
Nearby, Ronan was locked in a struggle with the wing, his movements deliberate but visibly strained. He carved a deep wound along the scales, the blade leaving a jagged line in its wake. Muttering a quick incantation under his breath, flames erupted from the dagger's tip, racing across the wing's outer layers. The fire licked at the beast's flesh, charring the tough scales as it spread.
Before the wing had a chance to fully regenerate, Farren leaped back into action. His blade pierced deep into the wing's dense layers, slicing through sinew and muscle with measured strength. With a firm grip, he dragged his sword downward, his every move calculated to bring the wing closer to tearing free.
Despite the Vuraskal's regenerative abilities, the pace of its healing was slowing—its efforts clearly strained. The massive wing and tail, now severed, fell heavily to the ground, their weight shaking the battlefield. The two warriors stood amidst the carnage, their blades poised. With a practiced motion, they flicked the blood clean from their weapons, readying themselves for whatever came next.
4
A sparkling female figure zipped through the air with a speed that was nearly impossible to follow. Her body seemed caught in a delicate balance, half-shrouded in crackling lightning and half untouched, as though she were holding herself on the brink of fully merging with her own powers. It didn't seem accidental, though—it was more like she was trying to hold herself back. I couldn't help but wonder: was there a drawback? Or just a lack of control?
Her vibrant, snowy-white hair, tied into twin ponytails, caught my eye even from a distance. The silky strands, well-styled yet with a certain ruffled charm, flowed down to her waist, bouncing with every sharp movement she made. Stray locks framed her face, giving her a naturally cute, almost effortless look. It felt like she hadn't bothered to style it properly—or maybe she just didn't care. Either way, the slightly messy, fluffy edges only seemed to make her even more endearing.
With a swift movement, her hair swaying in the wind, she raises her hand, aiming for the beast's ribs. The air around her distorts as a powerful water ball forms in front of her palm, swirling with steam. In an instant, the ball solidifies into the perfect shape and fires toward the beast, crashing into its ribs. The impact creates a glowing orange spot on its body, where the piercing ball lances through the flesh, only scratching away the outer layer, leaving the orange glow wide open.
As the flesh of the Vuraskal begins to heal, another mage's attack pierces through. A flaming fireball, shaped like a nail, bursts from the air, its blue flames strong enough to tear through the glowing limb and penetrate deep into the beast's body. It leaves a gaping hole behind. All it took was a simple incantation from Althea—her magic far surpassing Sela's. With that one attack, it was clear: she is a mage of a rank I'll never reach.
It was the work of a team. Sela, moving swiftly, closed in on the beast, targeting its weak spots—areas that regenerate slower. She spots them, launches an attack, and leaves the weak spot exposed, ready for Althea's final blow. The strike leaves lethal wounds on the beast, rendering it vulnerable.
Without missing a beat, the two prepare for their next move, falling into sync for another attack. Sela, already positioned at the next weak spot, is ready. She chants a spell from a distance, something I can't quite hear. But this time, instead of a sphere, she forms a sharp stone, spinning with incredible speed, aimed at the beast's thick neck.
Suddenly, the stone veers off course, crashing into the ground with a thud. "Woobsi, my bad," Sela giggles, scratching the back of her neck. "Hee, hee, hee. I missed, sorry."
"Hey! Don't get distracted, Sela!" Orin yells from beside me, his voice slicing through the air as it erupts unexpectedly. I glance over, my stomach sinking. The Vuraskal is about to attack—she needs to move!
"Soooorry, Orin!" Sela calls back, still not even glancing at the oncoming atta—
"Idiot..." Another voice cuts in. Althea, without incantations, casts a spell with a swift slash of wind. The gust tears through the air, striking the beast's head and slashing clean through its jaw. The force leaves its jaw hanging loosely, preventing it from advancing any closer to Sela. She takes the opportunity to retreat and regain her position.
"Thank you, Althea!!!" Sela's light, energetic voice rings out through the air as she propels herself forward. Sparks crackle around her, growing in intensity as they seem to envelop her, almost as if she is vanishing into the very air. The lightning surrounding her makes it hard to spot her clearly, but within the shimmering light, her clothes seem untouched by the electric glow. Only her hands, legs, face, and hair spark, their movements a blur in the crackling storm of energy.
"Just half and half, Sela. Half and—no, not the shoes! Damn it, focus—!" she mutters under her breath, frustration lacing her words.
In the blink of an eye, I lose sight of her. A single spark lingers in the air, but Sela is gone, leaving nothing behind but the fading crackle of her lightning. Her clothes, however, gently fall, caught by the wind as if gravity had just remembered them. But then, they too vanish—dissolving in a flash of lightning. Sela reappears in an instant, her form flickering out of view, her bare skin flashing like a brief streak of electric light before disappearing into the forest.
5
Althea glanced over the trail of sparks left by Sela, her expression one of mild exasperation as she rolled her eyes. It was clear this kind of chaos was nothing new to her. Without missing a beat, her focus snapped back to the Vuraskal. Her sharp gaze swept over its towering form, quickly identifying three weak spots—pulsing areas where the beast's regeneration seemed sluggish.
With a fluid motion, Althea conjured three spinning stones, their jagged edges sharp enough to pierce straight through a tree. With deadly precision, she released them. The stones tore through the air and struck true, ripping through the beast's limbs and sending chunks of flesh flying.
The Vuraskal staggered slightly, its movements growing sluggish as its weak spots became more vulnerable with each new wound. Even though its regenerative abilities were formidable, it was clear these weak spots served a critical purpose—like the arteries of its healing process, pumping life through its monstrous body. And yet, healing those points took far more time and energy than repairing ordinary flesh.
The beast's jaw, which Althea had sliced in half moments earlier to save Sela, was already whole again. Not a single trace of damage remained. It was a stark contrast to its weak spots, which still bled sluggishly, the tissue struggling to knit back together. The difference was undeniable: the Vuraskal's natural regeneration worked far faster on its body than on its exposed vulnerabilities.
"Ronan, Farren! Can you two create an opening at the beast's chest? I want to pierce a hole straight through the Vuraskal's heart. It should be weak enough now for me to land a direct hit."
Althea hovered midair, her palm steadily aimed at the beast's torso. Her vibrant purple eyes held a cold, focused intensity, unflinching as she directed her command to the two men below. They fought the Vuraskal head-on, clashing with its monstrous form in a chaotic melee.
Despite the danger of their close-quarters battle, both men responded immediately. Farren acted without hesitation, his weapon slicing through the air as he shifted the beast's attention. Ronan, however, managed to smirk in the middle of the chaos, his tone dripping with his usual slyness as he called back, "Of course, Missy."
Ignoring Ronan's comment, she starts spelling an incantation under her lips, the air colliding in front of her palm in a blue light, slowly forming a spike? nail? Hard to be specific, but it's sharp, something sharp enough to pierce a stone. Flames evoking around her, slowly absorbing into the shape of the nail. A base of a spinning stone, and an outer layer of compressed blue fire. When finishing the incantation, she murmurs the words, "Erua-flama."
With the wind pressure swirling around her, Althea's long, vibrant purple hair flows in graceful waves, straight and strikingly beautiful. Her cold, focused eyes lock onto the beast's chest, her gaze unwavering, pinpointing the exact spot she intends to strike. Her long, grey-white skirt cascades all the way down to her feet, its fabric rippling with the wind, creating an aura of ethereal elegance.
Standing motionless midair, her figure remains perfectly still, a sharp contrast to the way her hair and skirt flow in rhythm with the gusts around her. The fiery light from the spell in front of her casts a flickering glow across her face, highlighting her composed expression and the softly curving folds of her clothing. Shadows from the spell's flames dance along her skirt, their fleeting patterns accentuating the motion of the wind.
Her white dress, sleek and refined, clings to her figure with understated grace, its simplicity enhancing her serene presence. Draped over her shoulders is a shorter dark-purple cloak-like mantle, its fabric ending midway down her torso. Open at the front, it flutters lightly in the air, completing her elegant appearance.
My eyes were drawn to her floating figure, a vision of grace and power suspended in the air. The spiraling, stone-formed spell took shape in her palm, glowing faintly as it launched toward the beast's chest with devastating precision. Althea's cold expression didn't waver as she observed the scene unfold, her vibrant, dark-purple eyes glinting with a focused light. Her spell pierced through the Vuraskal's thick flesh, tearing apart its insides with merciless force. Blue flames danced in its wake, burning their way toward the creature's heart, leaving scorched trails across its body.
A strange, almost otherworldly atmosphere settled over the battlefield as I watched in awe. The beauty of the sparkling blue flames filling the air was mesmerizing, and Althea—majestic, untouchable, and serene—seemed to embody the very essence of magic. Her presence, her skill, her beauty—it was as if all of it were woven into the spell itself, leaving a lingering impression that captured the raw, breathtaking wonder of magic.
The beast's agonized scream ripped through the air, sharp and guttural, a final cry that sent shivers down my spine. Its limbs were torn apart by the spell's sharp edges, and the fire licked hungrily at its flesh, consuming its strength. And then, silence. The scream stopped abruptly as the Vuraskal's eyes dulled, their light extinguished into an empty abyss. No anger, no regret, no sorrow—only a vacant stillness.
The flames burrowed deeper, carving through the creature's scales as the sharpened stone pierced straight through its ribcage. The spell's trajectory carried it downward, embedding itself into the dirt below. A sharp, echoing clash reverberated through the air as the stone met the hard surface of the barrier beneath the ground, leaving behind a smoldering hole—a testament to the sheer, overwhelming power of Althea's magic.
6
Here's a revised version of your scene with smoother narration, more cohesive dialogue, and a stronger sense of Kaito's perspective:
With a thunderous crash, the Vuraskal falls to the forest floor, its massive body shaking the ground beneath us. The battle is over. Althea begins descending from the sky, her figure carried gracefully by the soft wind. For a moment, she doesn't look as cold as before. Actually, she looks kind of… adorable? One leg is extended straight while the other folds behind her, almost like a dancer mid-movement. Her calm expression softens her usual icy demeanor, though something about her presence is still intimidating. There's a quiet intensity in her gaze as she lands… It reminds me of someone…
Ronan and Farren sheath their weapons, already drifting away from the battlefield as if the fight hadn't even phased them. Their voices carry in laughter as they chat, their camaraderie unmistakable. Neither of them looks worn out—it's as if they could have kept fighting for hours. Watching them, it's clear these two are close friends.
"Good work!" Orin's booming voice snaps me out of my thoughts. He grins, clapping his hands together loudly. "Guess we'll have to celebrate with a feast after this, am I right?" His tone is uncharacteristically jovial, and I can't help but notice how different he seems. Maybe drinking really is his quirk—he looks like he's already imagining the tankards of ale waiting for him.
"That was incredible!" I blurt out, unable to hold back. "That last spell was fantastic! And Farren's and Ronan's fighting—just… damn. You guys are insanely skilled." My voice trails off as I continue to watch the scene, still processing the sheer power I'd just witnessed. But then, a thought strikes me. "Wait… where's Sela?"
"Yeah, they're strong, alright," Orin responds, his grin widening as he claps me on the shoulder. "Bet Ronan's gonna eat up all that praise you just gave him." He chuckles, then waves a hand dismissively. "Sela, though? She… well…"
Before he can finish, Althea interjects, her tone sharp and to the point. "She's changing," she says simply, her eyes flicking briefly toward the trees.
"Changing?" I echo, confused. Changing what? Weapons? Clothes? I glance around the clearing, trying to piece together what she means.
Ronan smirks, his voice dripping with mischief as he cuts in. "Yup, probably hiding behind a tree somewhere, putting her clothes back on after bein' na—"
Thwack. Althea's hand strikes the back of Ronan's head before he can finish. He lets out a muffled yelp, rubbing the spot where her sharp blow landed.
As I try to process this exchange, a figure steps out from behind the trees. It's Sela. Her slim frame emerges into the clearing, her expression as goofy as ever. She grins, a sly blush coloring her cheeks. "Hey! Sorry about that, heh heh heh," she says, scratching the back of her neck as she approaches.
"Aw… you're already dressed? Such a shame," Ronan teases, a cheeky grin spreading across his face. "You know, you could've just kept going na—"
Thwack. Althea's hand connects sharply with the back of his head, cutting him off mid-sentence.
Sela giggles, clearly amused. "I guess I could've joined the fight like that," she replies, her voice light and playful. "But… wouldn't that have been kinda awkward?"
Awkward? Not weird?! What people have I ended up with?!