So, I've started going back to the earlier chapters to try and start cleaning them up. Obviously they aren't finished yet, but I'm working on it. You guys might notice some of the chapters being moved around and being changed. Don't worry, I'll tell you guys when I finish, most likely by the end of next week. So, if you guys could please answer the poll and leave feedback in the comments so I can see if you guys are fine with the changes. I do plan for the story to end up where we are right now, but I will change a little bit of the journey. For example, how Vincent/Mike gets the heroines. Alright, now back to work.
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