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The Hermit Has Returned (Kinda)

The Hermit Has Returned (Kinda)

Greetings to those of you who read my story, or that one person who clicked cause they saw it on "Latest Updates" section. I've come to update some stuff. I've come to inform you that I haven't abandoned my baby out on the steps of a strangers doors and will be working on it later on. I've been suffering from some stuff lately and haven't had the motivation to continue the story.

Recently my YouTube Channel has been receiving some attention and I'm working on getting it more professional. On top of that I have school, so between these three things I haven't been really paying attention. It will take some time before I post my story for a few reason.

1. School (It's my first year of college and I'm not doing to well)

2. YouTube (I might take a break from that to focus on college)

3. I'm been thinking of rewriting it.

Recently, I've been think... My story is ok, but it's not quite what I want. I may want to (most likely) rewrite my story, but this time I'm just going to do it here instead of doing a new story. The premise is a bit different, and some other stuff. I don't like using more words than I need to get to the point.

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What will change? What won't?

The premise will stay relatively the same, a highschooler dies and is isekai'd. However, some key points will be changed/created so that the cloud boy makes more sense, as well as why he was isekai'd. Chapters 1, 2, 3, 4, and possibly 6.2 will stay while everything else will most likely be thrown into the trash. Unlike the first time I did a rewrite where my story was set too far into the future to do anything, this time it was set too far into the past. I could do a time skip, but I'm going to be honest. That sounds lazy and pathetic. I might as well give up writing if I did that. I'm also going to try and improve my comedy writing as well as tone down the swearing (god, there's so much fucking swearing). I may drop the sexual content warning tag because I genuinely don't ever see myself writing anything that descriptive or even do any, maybe I might do a minor scene, but I don't think it would warrant the need for the tag. The new premise:

After [I still need to come up with a name for the protagonist] younger sister dies, [dudes name] becomes a neet (probably. Still working out some shit). One day he gets an email from a stranger and then dies shortly after (the email doesn't kill him, but that would be kinda funny). He then wakes up as a girl in a new world

There is some tweaking for the premise still needed to be done, but it should be done soon. It might take a few months to do it, but I'll try to get around to it as soon as possible.

- KiebaHow