Yeah I’ve been rewriting and rewriting for… I don’t know now and I’ve gotten nowhere. So I’ve decide I’m just going to write what my heart say and try to improve along the way. Also I’ve got a job so I’ve been busy doing that (playing games in my spare time as I’m not in the mood to write a lot. Just think about writing). Plus a lot of paper work. But I know where I’m going with this story now that I’ve thought long and hard about it. And I’ve got my final ideas bubbling around in my head. I’ll update what I’m going to do now. First I’m going to make it so “father” (I REALLY need to come up with names for important characters). Instead it’s going to be some kids that “father” finds later. And I’ve got an idea of what I’m doing with my comedy, Instead of absurd analogy and… I don’t know what I’m doing with comedy. But I’ve been watching comedies like Konosuba, South Park, community, Family Guy, Ted, Big Bang Theory. And I’ve discovered how so comedy works. It’s not just absurd things happening but also the characters as well, which also helps me understand why people think you guys (at least what I’ve been told by people) is funny. Which is funny cause I wasn’t trying to be funny. Back on subject. After finding the kids, I wanna try to do a battle scene. In short some causal slice of life stuff which goes slow and then heaven happens and stuff gets more interesting. I have no clue when I’ll upload my next chapters. I’ll be removing the others and reuploading them later when I start the changes. It might be a story unlike the likes you’ve seen! Just kidding, everything’s been done already. I just you enjoy the journey along the way. Also I won’t be doing anything until I’ve got 15 chapters done. (So I can change stuff in advance). So if I do upload it’ll either be daily, weekly, or monthly depending on how far I get and life. I haven’t forgotten about my love project. Plus I do play games on Twitch sometimes so feel free to drop by… or don’t… I’m a pretty boring person. We’ll meet again. Don’t know where, don’t know when. But we’ll meet again… One sunny day… (Well probably rainy or cloudy since it’s always rainy here. And night since I’m busy in the day). Hugs and kiss. And I bid you adieu!

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