I'm currently working on my old chapter, fixing issues, errors, and spelling mistakes, among other things. For now, I’d say I finished chapters 1 - 17 and made chapters acceptable up to CH22. Then, there will probably be a significant drop in quality until CH27/28, when I began to take this work more seriously.

I don’t know why I didn’t give it notice sooner, but the thought I should inform you suddenly came, even if you are few ( or perhaps non-existent ).

If you want to avoid the inconvenience and are not dying to know what will happen next, wait until I finish the rest. I will update this message ( or perhaps make a new announcement) to provide a status update.

If you have difficulty reading related to things other than those stated above, I’ll gladly take all

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the possible feedback, but one thing at a time. I really need to finish cleaning up the mess first.

Chapter I think is completed (unless I got feedback saying the opposite): CH 1-17

Chapter I gave a fix but might need a second run: CH 18-22

Chapter that shouldn't need any change: 28 - and above.

Finally, although I don’t know if it matters. Chapter I tried reworking the dialogue to give more detail and information to the reader as an experiment (even if I don’t know if it made it better or worse): CH 1-14 (I'd gladly take feedback especialy about this last part )

Thx for your reading, the author.