Hello everyone, a message from the author: I recently posted the novel on Royal Road and received a review. The reviewer mentioned that, it’s missing several details. After thinking it over, I’ve decided to take a break and rewrite the novel. I plan to reupload it with a better synopsis, improved quality, more details, and proper world-building, Like i done in "System, I Don't Want To Have Babies."

I know some of you, especially new readers, might not mind the current version, but I’ve noticed a decline in popularity, and I believe these factors are contributing. The reviewer also mentioned that my chapters are too short. Although I think 1,000-word chapters are fine, I understand that readers prefer longer ones. Currently, there are 22 chapters with a total of 22.7K words, but it seems people still find them too short.

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Given this feedback, I’m considering rewriting the entire novel to make it much better, or I might start a new novel altogether. What do you think? I realize I didn’t fill in enough details at the beginning because I was rushing, but now I know better and will improve it.

This could be a new beginning. I might even take on a different name or focus on writing a new novel "Bullshit," which is a comedy and, as always, evil. But for now, I’m focusing on "System, I Don't Want Babies." Since a lot of people have left, I might not get many suggestions, but whatever happens, this story ends here.

Even if I continue, I will start fresh with a new name and everything from the beginning. Chapters will always be 1k+ words, it may also take a different path with 10% probability.

This Novel has 22 chapters on Webnovel for free with name BLOODLINE IMMORTALITY.