Hey everyone, my story Divine Souls was all over the place, plot holes, annoying character development, you name it.
Point is, i was going to re edit the story, but instead i decided to just start from scratch, this time there is less talking and more development all around, fights, plot, character progression.
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Anyway this is the new story Immortal Souls
Prologue was released and chapter 1 and 2 will be released either today and tomorrow, or over the next 3 days, we'll see if i have time.