Ok for this post I want to know your opinions like am I going to slow with the story or is it too short ( my range for each chapter is 1800- maybe low 2000 words). For chapter 3 I might change to 3rd person for a change to see how it flows might be good might be bad we will see. Hope you like it so far because I am actually just putting down what's in my imagination. Once this ff dies and the ratings are at like 2 I would just stop unless you ask me to finish it off [th_096_K.gif] . I do read your comments and will ry my hardest to do some changes here and there *cough* 'when i have time that is'.