Cliffhanger, sorry. I also would like to ask your opinion on the fight scene, any suggestions or feedback would be appreciated.
NOTE: He has met Solus, the Sun God, and the Acting Overgod. An Overgod is the overseer of the gods, so in this case, our developer friend, Jacob, also known as Kas!
His memories are returning slowly, and this [Destroy] power is one with many a limitation, unlike the evolved version, [Divine Destruction].
This power is very bad on him, it will use up 99% of his mana no matter what, whereas the [Divine Destruction] will use 45% no matter what. This spell will never be given to Kas until he remembers everything, alongside things like [Divine Creation] and such.
He is a bit overpowered, but at the same time, he can't destroy their organs or something like that. It can only destroy non-soulbound items, like the sword which was only an Ancient-grade Artifact, not soulbound. It was a duplicate of the Divine Artifact of the god of darkness.
See, the humans only know that up to Ancient-grade exists, and have never found a god's duplicate sword. If they had, it would be named a Divine Artifact of a god. So basically; he may be overpowered, but he's not TOO overpowered yet.
He is still, well, able to be injured. But he can't die, unbeknownst to Solus quite yet. That is because of the Immortality memories he was implanted with, and the memories of how to remove said immortality if he ever felt alone.
What do you feel he should be able to do? Be less overpowered or more so?
I have a very good idea at the moment, but you'll have to wait and see to believe it.
But here's current ideas:
- leaves school for adventuring guild?
- gets big boy house
- ladies are very 'back burner' idea, so don't worry, no harem or woman to be 'saved.'
That girl from before was just a kind gesture, by the way, not any romance. Maybe a friend? Who knows.
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I'll be trying to get a Status going, but I have no idea how to make the table not move when I put things. Maybe I do it manually? Here, I'll try.
Name: Kas Ravenwood (Alias: Overgod Jacob)
Age: 3
Race: Evolved Human (Concealed as: Human)
Class: Universal (Concealed as: Mage and Warrior)
HP:
Overgod: ∞
Current: 100/100,000 (Issues: Mana Deprivation I (Status: No threat)
MP:
Overgod: ∞
Current: 6,400,000/10,000,000
Rank:
Current: S
Potential: OVERGOD (Celestial), SSS (Fake)
Skills: Magic X (Celestial), All Magic (Gifted by: Jacob, SEALED), Combat Expertise VII, Endurance X, Special Magic X (Gifted by: Jacob)
That's my attempt.
Basically, the [Destroy] should only do 90%, but due to his massive amount of mana, it did 99% instead, but he is nearly cured now, after 2 hours. Special Magic includes Personal Magic that he has, currently, no knowledge of. I will be showing status at the end of every chapter.
I also dislike dealing with numbers stats, being hard to update and stick with, so that's why I went with Potential instead. His body is also growing in accordance to his power, so he may become a giant soon.
Weird how I put 500+ words into an author's note, but mainly this is an info dump as well, so I'll put everything I've said about stats and such in here now.
Adventurer's Guild + Mercenary's Guild Ranks:
SSS
SS
S
A
B
C
D
F
E
Assasin's Guild + Merchant's Guild ranks:
Grandmaster
Master
Adept
Advanced
Intermediate
Journeyman
(merchant's guild is based on your ability to do what is required, includes blacksmiths and such)
There's also a thing I'm thinking of called "Personal Guilds," where people can hire them to do a specific quest without it being government knowledge or something, so like swordsmithing guild, etc.
Potential is the ability of someone to perform with magic or with a sword. It describes what they will be able to do in the future, so C can be a decently good mage, A is an expert mage, S is a hero, and such. S and higher are called Hero Ranks. There are very few people in S-class or higher.
The Kingdom of Fos is the main kingdom. The population of 60+ million, the world population is 243 million.
Magic is used by just thinking it for some, but for others, it requires chanting to help imagine it.45% of the population is able to use magic. 20% of that is able to use magic chantless. 40% of the magical population can use above Level 5 spells, while only 20% can use Level 6, 5% Level 7, 2% Level 8, 1% Level 9, 0.01% Level 10, and only 5 people have ever been able to even start doing Godly magic, and 4 of them died trying, besides Kas now.