As the boy enters the forest that separates the Whiteford Academy and Rolfe Primero’s manor and walks uphill on the pathway leading to the building, he takes a moment to study the place where the entity has chosen to reside and to call her own. The manor which Rolfe made with her own two hands by the way really looks majestic as it is being bathed by the afternoon sunlight.
The boy ponders if it’s okay to call this place his home as well. Nah, the boy thinks. Judging from my past, how I moved from one part of the continent to another, I’ll probably end up leaving this manor. And based on the things he predicts will probably come for him in the future, the boy decides not to get used to the idea of living here comfortably as well.
The boy plays with the idea of leaving this place if it becomes too much. After all, a moving target is harder to hit, and why should he make it easier for the people who are after his life to find him?
Besides, the boy always wanted to visit all nine kingdoms in the Grandiel Continent and hit up their tourist spots, before it all goes to hell, before the Razors make their imminent arrival. Maybe he’ll even make a pilgrimage to all the famous bakeries from each kingdom and sample their blueberry muffins, see if the taste differs from one another.
And Synnove would most likely insist on tagging along, even though the boy ordered her to stay. Something about how the pigtails maid looks at him with such glazed over devoted eyes tells the boy that Synnove won’t take “No” for an answer.
As for Rolfe, shit… Rolfe would probably insist on standing our ground and fighting. Normally, the boy would have no problem with that, except for the minor detail regarding the huge collateral damage that is bound to follow should they choose to engage their foes openly and directly. The boy smiles wryly when he considers that most of the deaths and destructions won’t be caused by their enemies, but by the hands of the entity herself.
Ah fuck it, I’ll let Future Me handle that problem. The boy decides to stow the dilemma for another time. I’ll cross that bridge when I get to it, the boy smiles grimly. Or like the lady said, blow it up along with my numerous enemies.
The boy reaches the front door of the manor and as he wipes his bare feet on the mat located in front of it, briefly ponders if it’s possible to return to his old life, to his wife… and their children. After all, isn’t that the reason why he’s fighting so hard in the first place? So he could get to go home and be with them?
Using his powers, he could probably come up with a definite answer to put the matter the rest and give him some peace of mind, but the boy chooses not.
Not because he’s scared of what he will find out, but because he wants to hope and hold on to that dream, even if the dream is fleeting, and the hope forlorn.
The boy knocks and puts his hand on the handle, twisting it to push the front door open.
“I’m home.”
“Darling, welcome back. I missed you.”
“…”
The boy is momentarily stunned after closing the front door and entering the living room. The reason is because Rolfe is currently wearing something that would make the scantily-clad girls who work in a House of Pleasure blush and feel they were modestly dressed by comparison.
“I spent the whole day counting down the seconds, longing for your sweet embrace. Waiting for you to return so you can run into my arms and we-“
“You can drop the act, Rolfe. Synnove isn’t here with me.”
“Fuck!” the entity who has been leaning against the back of a sofa chair this whole time finally realizes the boy is alone in the living room, no familiar pigtails maid in-tow.
“Did she run off? Did you warned her what I was about to do?”
“No. Synnove’s a smart girl. She figured something like this would probably happen.”
“Son of a… that girl is playing dirty by not playing dirty. It seems I have to up my game…” grumbles the entity as she grabs a bathrobe lying on a sofa chair nearby and begins putting it on.
“Oh no no. Don’t bother getting dressed. Not on my account.” murmurs the boy.
“What are you, some kind of perverted adolescent schoolboy? It’s cold and haven’t you seen me naked before?”
“Not while you’re wearing that, I haven’t. And I am an adolescent schoolboy. The perverted part is debatable though.”
“No wait. I remember you telling me you spent several millenniums falling in the Time Abyss. Technically this means you’re a lecherous old man who enjoys secretly going through my drawers and sniffing at my panties in the morning.”
“Please go back to calling me a perverted adolescent schoolboy! I beg of you! And I have never done such things!”
“You could be, when I’m not looking. Even though I have eyes on the back of my head.”
“Then does this mean I’m such a bold criminal, I would go through your drawers while you are also present in the room?”
“Isn’t it more thrilling that way? It’s what I would do if I was in your position.”
“Don’t push your distorted fantasies on me and imagine that I would do the same things as you!”
“Ah, then I guess I can rest easy with the knowledge that you haven’t realized I used your dirty underwear to pleasure myself several times this morning.”
“Your Honor. The accused has admitted to his guilt! Please give out the heaviest sentence possible!”
“Not fair. You used your powers to find out some dirt on me.”
“I did no such thing! You’re the one who had to go blab your mouth.”
“Oh no. I was too late to realize it. Is this the good cop, bad cop routine?”
“We’re the only ones here!”
“Your underwear is really dirty by the way.”
“I’m sorry for having dirty underwear. I have brought great shame to my honor-wait, why am I the one apologizing?”
“Ahahaha.”
*sighs “What are those things called by the way?”
“This thing I’m wearing underneath my bathrobe? It’s a three piece lace garter set. I made them myself in my workshop.”
“Did you run out of materials while making them?”
“It’s purposely designed that way. This classic lace garter belt set features a crotchless g string, lace garter, peek a boo bra with satin bow details.”
“Why are you speaking as if you’re a salesperson promoting items to bored housewives?”
“Stockings not included.”
“They’re not part of the set!? You have to buy them separately!?”
“Free shipping on orders over $70.”
“What is this dollar that you speak of? Please only use the currencies available on this continent!”
“Free panty with all orders (valued at $7.95).”
“A free gift to sweeten the deal? That’s the most basic/effective sale tactic ever!”
“Please visit my website for more details.”
“Website!? Why are you speaking of things that haven’t existed yet?”
“Incidentally, I think I’m the first person in the Grandiel Continent to introduce the g string… or crotchless underwear for that matter as well.”
“Stop designing things that will give priests a heart attack by accident!”
“The free panty can be used to shoot your sperm in while you masturbate as you watch your neighbors through their windows.”
“Wait! The three piece lace garter set isn’t for bored housewives looking to spice up their marriage, but for male voyeurs!? And someone, please call the authority!”
“Ahahaha.” the entity laughs as she gives the boy a moment to catch his breath. “So how was your day?” she asks him.
“Pretty good. Managed to get through the first round of interview. Now I’m waiting for them to call.”
“Make sure you’ve got all your curriculum vitae in order before you go for the next round.”
“Oh, and I also got rid of Master Haithur. So, yay.”
“Pity. I rather liked Master Haithur.”
“Really?”
“Yeah, he’s one of those rare noble teachers who knew to keep their distance from me.”
“Did he tried approaching you to recruit you for Ouroboros?”
“Once. I rejected the offer.”
“What did you tell him?”
“I told him the words and I quote ‘Fuck off’.”
“That would work. And he never bothered you after that?”
“Never, not even indirectly.”
“Wow. That really is impressive.”
“It must have been how I said the words to him.”
“You’ve got to teach me that trick one day.”
“No need. You’ll get there, eventually.”
“I guess I will. So, how was your day?”
“I spent the better part of my morning making these items in my workshop. But now that Synnove is not here, it looks like that plan has gone down the drain.”
“What are you planning on doing exactly?”
“I was thinking that maybe I would netorare you in front of her, try to see if that act would jog some dormant memories from my distant past(s).”
“Netorarewhat now?”
“You know… cuckold.”
“I don’t even… what?”
“Do you need me to draw you a picture? I was planning on having my way with you while forcing her to watch. Godsdamn, why are you making me say all these embarrassing things out loud?”
”Okay, firstly, I guess that would explain the presence of the length of rope by your feet. Secondly, you’re a very horrible person, Rolfe. And finally, I don’t want to hear the word embarrassing from someone who walks around while wearing a crotchless underwear!”
“Hey. I’m not a bad person. I’m just reincarnated that way.”
“Seriously, Rolfe. That was horrible and you should feel horrible. I mean, what kind of sick twisted society would popularize such a concept?”
“You can thank the Japanese for that.”
“…”
*sighs “Anyway, since that plan failed, it’s time to move on to Plan B.”
“Why do I have a violent sensation in the pit of my stomach when I hear you say that?”
“We’re gonna have to do a little pegging.”
“Well that doesn’t sound too bad.”
“I’m gonna go equip my strap on, pour a generous amount of lubricant down your butt crack, bend you over by the window and have my way with you until your pigtails maid comes running to your aid, alerted by your cries for help.”
“…”
“Are you up for it?”
“I was wrong. You’re not a bad person.”
“I’m not? That’s a relief. I was beginning to doubt myself as well.”
“No, you’re just morally corrupt.”
“You say that like it’s a bad thing. And don’t worry. It’s like what I’ve mentioned before, you will get there eventually, once you have lived long enough.”
“Your moral compass is so fucked up, I’m shocked as to how you’ve managed to put on your pants or even find your way to class every morning.”
“I’m just a simple diligent student, trying to make my way in the world. I still put my pants on one leg at a time. And I was kidding by the way.”
“Thank the gods. For a second there I thought you were being serious about-“
“I don’t have time to get the lubricant.”
“There’s ALWAYS time to get the lubricant!”
“Lesson number whatever. I can’t remember the number because it’s been so long.”
“…”
“Anyway, lesson number [insert the appropriate number here]: The secret to a successful bluff is never to bluff.”
“So I take it we’re not doing the pegging thing right?”
“Don’t sound too disappointed.”
“I am not disappointed! What possible reason should warrant me not to sound happy that a foreign object failed to enter my posterior?”
“Ahahaha. Anyway, follow me.”
“Where are we going? Don’t tell me you have a super secret sex dungeon underneath your house? Because I’ve got to tell ya, my quota for painful things penetrating my body has already been filled by Master Haithur’s blade this morning.”
“Close, but no. We’re going to my workshop.”
“…”
“Didn’t I tell you I was going to give you a tour?”
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The entity leads the boy to the kitchen before she pressed on one of the bare walls there to open a secret entrance that reveal a hidden staircase. The boy follows Rolfe down those stairs before they come across a thick door, which the entity opens after fiddling around a bit.
Technically, the entity was speaking truthfully when she said there are no locked doors in her manor, even to her workshop. What Rolfe failed to mention is her various safeguards, security alarms and bobby traps that surrounds those doors, some more than others, to deter would-be intruders and uninvited guests.
The boy has day-dreamed about entering Rolfe’s workshop, ever since he learned the existence of it. He was almost tempted to come here at night should he finds the opportunity to do so. But the boy didn’t want to offend the entity. Sure, he could probably bypass most security measures, but you can never truly tell when it comes to Rolfe.
In his past life, the boy has been many things, a knight in training, a junior member of Ouroboros, a retired assassin, a soldier. He has been thoroughly trained to be well disciplined if the occasion calls for it. If a carriage’s wheel runs over one of his foot, the boy could simply shrug it off and not make a big deal out of. But now that the boy has entered what possibly could be the most important room in the Grandiel Continent, even though he is trying his best to keep it in, the boy can’t help but gasp in awe.
“This is… this is…”
“Yeah yeah, I know. If you think this is incredible, you should see some of the laboratories I’ve had in my previous live(s), way back when I was in a full-tilt mad scientist mode.”
“I think I just came in my pants.”
“Don’t worry. I have a pill in here somewhere that could fix that.”
“Why…”
“Hmmm?”
“Why would you burn all these wonderful things down?”
“I did what now?”
“Two years from now, after you graduated from this academy and declined an invitation to join the Order of Enahel, you destroyed it all, rather than taking some of them with you.”
“I don’t know. You’ll have to ask future me that. Have you tried using your powers to find out?”
“A bunch of Unknown messages keeps appearing.”
“Well I guess we’ll never know then.”
“…”
“Looks like you’re still unsatisfied. Well, it could be that I was unable to get the 4D Pocket to work in this reincarnation.”
“4D Pocket?”
“You know... Doraemon? Blue robotic cat? Comes from the future? Has an unhealthy obsession with doriyaki?
“…”
*sighs “I really have got to introduce manga to this continent.”
“…”
“Anyway, another reason is maybe I got tired of it all and decided to start anew.”
“But if you had one or two things in this room, you could have saved her.”
“I’m guessing you’re referring to my future pregnant wife who got kidnapped.”
“Yes.”
“Well since that future is averted, I’m guessing I won’t remember regretting it.”
“That girl is still going to be kidnapped by those bandits.”
“Then it looks like we’ll have to make a trip two years from now and avert that as well.”
“I’ve already made a mental note of it. She really did love you by the way. And you her.”
“I know.”
“But now you’re with me.”
“I know.”
“It boggles the mind, what could have been…”
“You should really stop thinking about it too much. Or else you’ll go crazy.”
“I think I already have.”
“Well that makes the two of us.”
“…”
“Anyway, I love you now. Which means anything I have in this room is at your disposal.”
“…”
“Don’t everyone thank me at once.”
“I’m sorry. It’s just that my brain is ejaculating so much happiness right now, I think I broke a valve. Could you repeat that one more time?”
“What? That anything I have in this room is at your disposal?”
“No, the first part.”
“I love you?”
“Yes, say it again.”
“I love you.”
“At least one more time, to make sure I’m not imagining things.”
“Okay now you’re just being a dick.”
“That’s the Rolfe that I remember.”
“Asshole… Anyway, unlike Gian whose motto is ‘What's yours is mine and what's mine is mine,’ I have no problem sharing my stuff with you. Except my toothbrush, that’s my personal pet peeve.”
A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.
“I’m guessing this Gian is a character from Doraemon that you’ve mentioned just now.”
“You catch on quick. I knew there was a reason I keep you around.”
“Wait, does this mean I’m Doraemon?”
“No. If anyone’s anything, I’m Doraemon. And you… you’re Nobita.”
“Who’s that?”
“A wimp of a kid who always come home crying, begging Doraemon for help after he gets bullied.”
“Sounds like a giant wuss.”
“He could be sometimes, yeah.”
“Doesn’t seem to be similar to me.”
“To be honest, there are times you would act like a little bitch.”
“Oh yeah? When?”
“Remember the first night you spent here, in this manor?”
“…”
“Well?”
“Okay, I admit, there are times I tend to lose my composure and let my emotions gets the best of me.”
“That’s the textbook definition of being a little bitch.”
“Anyway… I really don’t know how to thank you for your help.” the boy embarrassedly scratches his reddening cheeks.
“Oh, I can think of a few things. For starters…” the entity slowly open the bathrobe she’s wearing as she approaches the boy’s side.
“Seriously, I think I’m the only one who is getting any benefits from this relationship.”
“Believe me, if you can really read my mind, you will know that isn’t true.” whispers the entity while she starts to kiss him on the neck and shoulder.
The boy could only respond with a groan of pleasure. As the boy takes off his shirt, he cocks his head to the side, as if checking on something.
“What is it? Is someone coming to interrupt us just as we’re getting to the good part?”
“No… just making sure… it's nothing really.”
“Tell me.”
“It’s just that…” the boy decided to be honest with the entity and tell her the truth.”On the first night I got here, I made quite an impression on Mistress Ricon, on the second night I slept with you, and on the third night Synnove propose to me...”
“And now you wanted to check and see if there’s any new girl who has fallen for you.”
“Not to toot my own trumpet… but yeah.”
“Oh wow, ladies and gentlemen, we have a miniature Warlord Graves in the making here. Future lady-killer, heartbreaker, skirt chaser.”
“Stop it.”
“So what’s the verdict, Mr. Smooth Operator?”
*sighs “Well, there was this one girl but I nipped that one right in the bud.”
“What did you do?”
“I sent her images that would give her nightmares’ nightmares.”
“You gave the girl your dick pic?”
“No!”
“Ahahaha.”
“I telepathically sent her scenes from my past, plus some of Humanity’s not-so-finest hours that I was witnessed to, with a little bit of the stuff I had seen in the Time Abyss added into the mix.”
“That would do the trick. And what do you mean telepathically?”
“She’s a mind reader.”
“Oooh, I didn’t know we have one so close in the academy.”
“Yeah. Luckily I realized it in time.”
“Anyway, if you had sent me such images, I would have considered them as love letters.”
“I guess that just speaks volumes of what you have been through.”
“Darling…” the entity flashes the boy a smile, the ones that predators generally make when they’re playing with their prey.
“You can’t even fathom a fraction of it.”
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Later on that evening, after the entity had carried the exhausted sleeping boy up to the bedroom so they could settle in for the night, something happened which escaped the boy’s notice. And he won’t realize it until it’s too late.
Thousands upon thousands of miles to the west of them, way beyond the wasteland known as the Khazun mountain range, at the farthest peak of the Grandiel Continent that juts out to sea, a rip in the fabric of time and space appeared.
This rip, small as a micro hole at first, gradually expanded large enough until the power couldn’t be contained and a large shockwave occurred. This explosion of sound if it were to happen in a densely packed forest would have leveled rows of trees for miles. But since there was no vegetation present here, the only visible damage was a small mountain that got leveled and collapsed into the sea after it took the brunt of the explosion.
The sound range of was so far reaching, it shocked the Alvian Kingdom, causing the citizens living near the edge of the Khazun mountain range to jump out of their beds and flood the streets.
As the dusts settle down, a figure can be seen exiting from the rip, nearly tumbling off the cliff and into the ocean, but manages to halt herself in time.
“Holy shit! It works!” laughs the scarlet twintails girl, not caring that she could have died had she failed to stop herself at the last moment. Meanwhile the rip behind her gradually grows smaller until it disappears all together.
“Wait… this isn’t Castle Adler.” the girl looks around trying to reorient herself. “Am I in the Khazun mountain range?” the girl asks to no one in particular as she observes the sharp black obsidian rocks that are present all around her.
“Yup, I’m in the Khazun mountain range.” murmurs the girl as she confirms her position using the stars above her. “How the heck did I get thrown so far off course?”
The girl sighs. “Well… Time Jumping is more of an art than science. And at least I didn’t get dropped into the middle of the ocean with no land in sight. Still, it’s gonna be hassle leaving this place. And I wanted to meet him as soon as possible.”
The girl looks around to confirm that there is no other person around or if there’s a mode of transportation available. “So, should I walk out of here, or swim? I’ll let fate decide.” grins the girl as she takes a gold coin from her pocket and flips it high into the air.
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END OF DAY 4
Yay. We finally climbed back up from #40 to #38. Thank you for everyone who voted. Sadly, no comics today because I'm too tired to do so.
This chapter is dedicated to readers Empty, Strategist26 as well as the countless others who are kind enough to leave a review.
I'm sorry if I have missed any of your questions, If you wish you can post them again and I'll try my best to answer them.
So, will the boy's rear chastity remain sacred? What is the identity of this new girl? Will we ever get a picture of Rolfe in a three piece lace garter set, stockings included? Find out next week on Demon Hero Reaper Saviour Killer Assassin Robotic Cat From The Future.
Anyway, Q and A session. We haven’t had this for a while. Let’s get the ball started, shall we? First caller, you’re on the air with me. What’s your question?
> 08/08/2015 15:09:01VenomousRequiem Wrote: [ -> ]Synnove needs to die
Good gods… NEXT!
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Okay, this one is actually from my message box.
> Wrote: I was reading that demon hero reaper saviour fiction of yours and was wondering about something. What happend in the early chapters.... first you read about a soilder, then some wierd ass kid that dies?! and the godly beeings talking? So if im understanding this right the insane kid, or the hyper one. Wichever floar you'r boat. was the hero but he died? and so the soilder have to save it? I'm sorry but i was too confused to countinue reading. I am getting this right? right? and who was the girl drinking tea with wtf? im sorry but could you explain so i can read not beeing blind? sorry for asking but i really enjoyed it but couldent countine becuse of my mind getting raped.
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> Too complicated for my brain and english understanding :p
> Thanks
Fine, I’ll just give you a cliff note summary here.
Chapter 0 – prologue
Chapter 1 until 4 – We meet a nice guy named Marven. He dies.
Chapter 5 – We’re introduced with a Nameless Main Character as he falls in a Time Abyss. NMC meets a little girl who is also a kind goddess. Kind goddess grants NMC powers, sends NMC on his way.
Chapter 6 – 7 NMC wakes up in his younger body, shenanigans happens.
Chapter 8 – Little girl who is also a kind goddess tries to find out what happened to her sister.
Chapter 9 – 12 NMC reunites with people he claims to be his friends Athorius and Marven (wait what?) but they aren’t because he totally fucked up that meeting.
Chapter 13 – 15 We find out Marven didn’t actually die but survived his first meeting with the Razors. He goes on to have his own adventures.
Chapter 16 – 74 More NMC’s shenanigans!
Hope this explanation helps.
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> 21/09/2015 20:39:32Dragrath Wrote: [ -> ]Haha the story is fine so far seeing as the MC's trolliness is the main draw. Thus the only thing that's being dragged out is the continued existence of a certain ouroboros member with his eye on the headmaster spot...
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> Also how long has it been since our MC got his last blueberry muffin fix?
The last one he had was way back, long before his fall in the Time Abyss.
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> 04/10/2015 00:11:46blackfear2 Wrote: [ -> ]Do you imply that teeth got molested somehow because i can t say you are denying it
No. I’m not implying that Teeth the horse got molested. It’s just that he isn’t happy with his dad’s fillydering ways?
Heh, get it? Because I made a pun using the words filly and philandering.
….
No one gets me.
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> 05/11/2015 11:29:30ssj782 Wrote: [ -> ]Was the snake questioning for my benefit? I saw a bit of my comment from the last chapter in this one :P
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> Edit: Out of curiosity, what is with his obsession with blueberry muffins? He brings them up all the time, but rarely actually gets any (I'm remembering once, but I'm not 100%).
It has something to do with his past, that’s all I’m at liberty to say. I’m also turning it into a running gag, trying to see for how long I could deny the boy from ever having one.
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> 05/11/2015 12:15:41Hexwolfx Wrote: [ -> ]I have ask if there was a blue berry shortage do think he'd have a sicoaedbreak.
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> Also if Synnove covered her self in blueberry juice you think he'd turn into a beast and ravish her
I'm guessing you mean a psychotic break, and yes he will have one as he keeps getting blueberry muffinblocked at every turn. And covering oneself in blueberry juice? I think you’ve invented a new fetish there.
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> 05/11/2015 14:31:50j0nn0 Wrote: [ -> ]When will he get his muffins?!?
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> Thanks for the chapter.
NEVER!
Muahahaha! Mine is an evil laugh,
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> 07/11/2015 15:55:42Dunford Wrote: [ -> ]This chapter was absolutely brilliant! Well done good sir, well done!
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> PS: I've been wondering for some time now, are these razors at all related to the enemy in Andur's Until Death? Because that would be a great crossover. ;)
They are not related although it would have made a great crossover. But I can confirm they are partly inspired because I remember reading Andur’s Until Death and thinking ‘Wow those are some scary motherfuckers.’ But Andur’s enemy is organic (if I’m not mistaken) while mine is made from metal.
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> 07/11/2015 23:14:11VenomousRequiem Wrote: [ -> ]Now I did say this about 60 chapters ago but I still stand by my opinion that synnove needs to die. she's kinda an annoying filler character. Like a pretzel next to a blueberry muffin. Why is it even there?
Guards!
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> 14/11/2015 20:50:07TobascoDragon Wrote: [ -> ]Don't use thread it can cause infection and fester, recommend hair or catgut. not necessarily made from cat. Google it
> Hair (strand from Synnove or a horses tail)
Thanks, but since the boy has an increased healing factor, I don’t think he has to worry about infection. But I’ll keep this nice tidbit for future reference.
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> 12/11/2015 08:45:58thedarkkinggrim Wrote: [ -> ]still has not laid her........ really? can some one tell me not?
He still hasn’t laid Synnove, but he will… eventually…
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> 12/11/2015 22:44:58Eberbach Wrote: [ -> ]Wait so is he drinking her piss? If so, that escalated quickly...
I intentionally wrote it vaguely. Remember Synnove’s leaking wet pu- line? It’s whatever the reader chooses to interpret it to be.
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> 12/11/2015 08:43:52GreenVintral Wrote: [ -> ]WHAT LOOK SENSEI
> I WANNA KNOW DAMMIT
He gave her that look.
Thanks to user Melakias for helping me answer this.
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> 12/11/2015 14:55:19Hexwolfx Wrote: [ -> ]My questions
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> 1.Well the MC every have a thresome?
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> 2.Well the MC every try using magic?
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> 3Well the MC get a pet(Synnove dosen't count)?
1. Yes… No... Maybe… I don’ know. I haven’t thought that far ahead. But if all participants are willing, then why the hell not?
2. Just a little, because I consider his limited omniscience to be an OP ability already. No need to add magic to dominate his opponents as well.
3. He will get at least two.
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> 12/11/2015 10:28:30VenomousRequiem Wrote: [ -> ]Synnove = Crappy novel. she needs to die. If he sleeps with her I'm giving up on this disaster you're trying to pass up as a novel.
You again? How did you manage to get pass the guards?
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> 26/11/2015 03:16:44rythms23 Wrote: [ -> ]ummm Synnove is a virgin????
Yes, because she has never lain with a man before. Masturbating or using inanimate objects doesn’t count.
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> 22/11/2015 01:13:03VenomousRequiem Wrote: [ -> ]I'm just saying synove should die, its up to you how she does ... It could be sudden, slow, heart rending, cruel and torturous, torturous and cruel... wait did I repeat myself in that last one? nah it's backwards so it must be completely different. Back on topic she alters the feel of the story in what I feel to be a negative way. I swear you writers must receive no love at home with how desperately most of you are are trying to introduce Harems to every god damned story that has a half decent following. Not everyone in this world is a pervert. Also it's a bit slow paced with the only redeeming factor being the witty nonsensical dialogue... remember when he barged into the classroom trying to act like a pirate around four days ago... I don't because that was fifty bleeping! chapters ago...
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> QUICK RECAP FOR LAZY PEOPLE WHO COULDN'T BE BOTHERED READING MY SHORT REVIEW
> - Kill Synove
> - No Harem please
> - speed up the pace, not the amount of chapters released
> - Fuck you for not reading my short review (If you didn't of course :))
Okay, you really need to stop posting spoilers on what I plan to do with Synnove.