Ok, so Raider had been approved, the link for it is in the authors note above, I have to say it however,emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, those instant 0.5 star reveiws those are nice, really really nice lol.  

oh well some people just want to be assholes and not tell you why they dont like your novel that you work hard on, or how you could make it better.

This tale has been unlawfully obtained from Royal Road. If you discover it on Amazon, kindly report it.

so be it.

/EndRant

I will be posting another chapter of it today, and then one on the weekend, maybe even two just to get things flowing I dont know we will see...

lol