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A Wanderer's Story by Dms143
Suggestions,Corrections & Criticism!

Suggestions,Corrections & Criticism!

As the Title implies i would heartily welcome all your input and feedback here in this thread and hope that it would help me improve my writing and this Fan Fic {[999abo}]

Cheers!

Stolen story; please report.

Thanks to several helpful authors for proofreading my material:

VIM1INC

DreadMoirai

Shadow

and others who i forgot to mention please put your name here then {[999baz}]