Hey guys! So I am really struggling to remember to post because I wrote this story a while back and I started realising that there are a bunch of things I neeed to change to fit the story later. I don't know If I am going to continue writing this story or not. I might be continuing soon but for now, I am not so sure anything will be posted anymore. I am planning on writing something else and putting more description into it. I am hoping that maybe I will enjoy it more and eventually be able to post it here. I hope you guys understand. Now time to spend up the next 485 words. So I am thinking of doing kind of a similar character style to this story, just a completely different setting. I don't know how well this will work, but the character I have built is the character I am most proud of. The only difference is she is more open. I would love it if you guys would suggest things to make my character better or even things you would like to see in a story. And before you come out and diss me super hard about how horrible my story is, It is a lot harder to write a story than it is to read one. Just going to put that out there. It took me over three months to get twenty pages as it was, and you have to be careful not to take other people's ideas. Another thing is that it is hard to fill a page with as much detail as possible without boring readers and yourself. Yay! just another 220 words! Another thing. Try to calm down. There may be pressure in deadlines, but rather pass the deadline by a day or two with amazing content, than on the deadline with junk. I guess that is the biggest reason I won't be continuing. I suck at deadlines, and this is just way to much work to be put in. Now, because I am running out of things to say, I am going to give you a bit of the new story I am writing.
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A smile shone through the small crowd of people. “She is adorable! Gray eyes might not hold any power, but they sure are pretty!” A woman exclaimed. Her eyes were an electric blue, and her hair was a solid black. “Her hair looks like yours Natalie!” She said to the older woman next to her. “And she has Patrick’s smile.” Natalie responded. “She looks a lot like you Nora. Minus the eyes.” The person they were fawning over was in fact a baby. Her small hands grabbing at the air in front of her. Unbeknownst to the people in the room, there were in fact three spirits floating in front of the child.
Type in the comments any names that spring to mind when you read this! And as well, don't kill me for stopping this book. (Maybe?) There is just waaaaay too much work needed to be put in thios story. I really hope you understand
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