For those that read the whole thing. Thank you it means a lot but Im discontinuing this novel.
my plans are to do a soft reboot of the story with all the main plot points still there such as the red age and how it caused the curses that are plaguing this world.
If you discover this tale on Amazon, be aware that it has been unlawfully taken from Royal Road. Please report it.
this was my first attempt at writing and re-reading it all made me realize how rushed certain parts are how little certain things I wanted to emphasize (Marlin’s mentally broken and exhausted life having basically no impact.) and more such things.