Hello, peaople. After rereading the whole story I had to try a lot not to die of blood loss. My bleeding eyes still hurt like hell.

I am considering to do a few things with it.

It's up to you to decide.

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Continue as it is: form, plot, characters, a way of speaking and dialogue.

Drop

Rewrite: It will take a while but I will try to make it darker, and serious story. For now, it was happy, go lucky overpowered MC PoV who does not understand shit about the world because he is stoned all the time(I judged him like that after reading).

Anyway, it was fun to write

it is for you to decide

I will never give up

Good luck