SORRY EVERYONE!!!
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Real Life just crashed down on me hard. [th_107_.gif]
I'm failing my biology class and I have to ready for some major exams. :perche:
I already started studying for these exams Mid-March since they cover everything I learned ALL YEAR!
About this story and my promise. Chapter 5 is 1.7K words in and has yet to be proofread. I didn't get much time and was looking at my schedule for today, tomorrow, and the next day and saw that I'm booked tight on an hourly schedule. Don't worry! I'm keeping track of how many chapters I owe you and the time I am in Hiatus counts as well!
In addition, looking at my work, I had a question. Am I being too descriptive? It seems that I'm explaining the setting and characteristics of many things accurately. My question is, Are my descriptions making the story too boring by giving you guys a clear mental image as to how everything looks yet still letting you use you use your imagination?
This is my first light novel so I don't know how I will have to change my writing. So far to my knowledge a light novel is the same as a book but is geared mainly towards young adults and teens. I have two other stories that have been in creation for at the least for 3 full years but they are in a completely different style than this story. In short there are lots of limitations on what I can put in them but those limitations don't apply here due to this story's genre. I digress back to my main point...
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Please let me know if I am being too descriptive or not. Please give me good feedback because THIS WILL AFFECT THE STORY YOU ARE READING!!!
... let me say it one more time....
FEEDBACK THIS TIME = YOU ENJOYING STORY OR NOT
there that should be simple enough... I hope...
Hope you guys are doing well and will have a better month and a couple of days than me!
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Expect changes when I come back! I will be renaming my chapters since I am slow and bad at naming. Furthermore I will take out Sora's part until later because it will complicate everything if Sora is introduced now.
Trust me, you will have a lot of characters (good and bad) that you will have to keep tabs about. Adding Sora's complex story and background plot will equate to you having a fried brain. I will stay with Sophos for now and slowly start expanding and complicating the story... so get ready!
Sorry that I forgot to put this in.