I was walking home like any other day. over in Japan there was a big game going around and it was finally being released world wide. the price was nothing for me. I HAD to get one. my life probably sucks worse then any other right now. why? you may ask. simple. my eyes. Spirit Force can be a wonderful thing. but when you are the second strongest Spirit Force user around it gets to be a pain. I walk down the street and get looks from everybody I walk past. wait a moment, here comes a problem now...
"YOU!!! Olivia Fox. fight me" Said victim number one. you see I have fans and yet so many people trying to take the number 2 spot. I would aim for number 1 but he is unbeatable. the Victim number one charged at me and then using the hidden knife he had tried to cut me while the knife started to glow the colour of his soul. I saw it coming and avoided it before he even moved towards me... did I mention I can see the future? I can also see things with any type of vision I chose. my sight is near limitless, and anything in my sight is at risk.
"scramble" I said in a gentle monotone as he fell to the ground. to boring. I continued back to my house doing the same to anyone who got in my way. I then got everything set up to play Virtual Revolution. it was a simple headgear. I put it on while sitting down I entered the game. I ignored anything irrelevant and skipped to character creation. FINALLY!!! I looked at myself. I was tall, blond hair with bright glowing white eyes that could work as torches. I had a beautiful figure that men have attempted to rape me for, nobody succeeded. my skin was a gentle white and soft to the touch. there was only one problem. my eyes couldn't be altered.
"" Someone was about to ask me about more options but I answered for him having seen what he would say.
"Spirit Force. no starter gear" I said simply, I didn't need it.
Eyes Of A GodMastery: Grand Master Level 999Blessed with the all seeing eyes there is nothing that escapes your sight. you can see through anything and everything
Eyes Of AlterationMastery: Grand Master Level 999Blessed with the all seeing eyes your understanding of how things work is unparalleled. with Spirit Force you can alter what your eyes perceive
wow... I am that powerful already? I had hopes my eyes could be limited but I guess not. my race was asked so I made the smartest choice. I picked the.... there are 390,950,231 races... oh joy.
[tablle]Mystic Cave SpiderThis is a Divine Beast that looks humanoid in shape,however in contains its 4 legs on its back and it can transform its body turning its arms and legs into that of a spider. you get a natural web and each strand of hair has an eye on it. in humanoid form the only signs of being a spider are the 4 legs on the back that can be retracted and also it is possible to be 'tamed' by people reducing the cost of death by 50%[/table]
finally, maybe now I can meet up with big brother. I have not seen him in a while and I have seen his Spirit Force in the game I wonder if he has a cute girl friend yet? or is he still training at step father's dojo? he always was a meat head... oh well. it has been a long time, I hope he hasn't forgotten about me. it was then I noticed something, I chose the wrong starting city, my starting city is very far away from his, I can at least see him surrounded... by... girls... I am going to kill him in his sleep....
Richard's Point Of View
I felt a huge amount of blood lust directed at me. it was a lot but I could not sense anything other then bloodlust, maybe the game is br.... I mean maybe the game is not at fault and I am just going crazy
Luke's Point Of View
hmm? I thought I felt something for a second, probably nothing...
Olivia's Point Of View
looking around my own start area I see 327 classes available and 12 hidden classes. one of the hidden classes is something I will want, best get on it, I walk over to the Guild hall where the mages dwell. I am not even joking that was written on the sign outside. I then walk past the receptionist and simply walk up to the archmages office. "Hello there archmage Norman, may I speak with you. it is important" I said simply and he looked at me curiously.
"How did you get past the guards?" he asked and I smiled with a hint of evil in my eye that made him shiver.
"I looked into their future and their past and found out all there was to know about them, simple as that" I said wit a smile and he looked at me sceptical at first. "You are Norman Faust, archmage of this college and a member of the Rorastien organisation. you can use 4973 spells and have knowledge of 9373 spells, you had a daughter who died with her mother at the hands of the last great destroyer and you killed that destroyer even though you helped create it. you were lost and without a path but you were offered the job as archmage you took it with little else to do and found a gimps of hope in your students of a new world that you can help improve. I am here to ask you of something else though" I said but at this point his mind was blank after being forced to remember his past and being read like a book, he was now scared of me even though in a fight I would lose instantly as my stats apart from my mental stats are fixed at 1. I checked and I will never be able to grow stronger or faster. only my intelligence and wisdom can grow.
"What is it that you want from me?" Norman asked me and I smiled as I walked over to a wall, the wall was fake and I opened it typing in the password. that I found inside of Norman's head.
"I want to become a specific type of mage, it compliments my all seeing eye well" I said as I happily walked down into the dungeons. I grabbed a book that was hidden under a mountain of blood from 483 torture victims to which only 6 were actually guilty of crime. what I wanted was to become a Teleportation Mage. it will take a second at most to reach him.
"I am sorry, but you have not the mana to teleport" Norman said to me and I turned to my menu. I need to be level 50 to gain a Mana supply alongside my spirit force. and the level cap is set to 100... wait a level cap? double checking the stats can go up to 9999... what happened to 0 limitations? this game is a rip off...
NOOOOO!!!!! SHUT UP!!!! it is not broken, it isn't!!!!! this is just the initial release. and there are still the unlimited skills
yea yea. there is 487,903,753,433 possible skills, it is not infinite, and besides, you promised 0 limitations, and yet there are limits,
There are not limits, at the moment there are but it will still take 80/90 years to reach them, and I besides you cant tell anyone and I will make sure of it
oh no you wouldn't. YOU WOULDN'T!!!!!!
Quest Given By GodDifficulty: guaranteedRequirement: SAY NOTHING ABOUT ANY LIMITS!!! It will be patched as soon as the programming is finishedReward; you get to see your little brother Richard againUpon quest failure Richard7 will receive knowledge of your Eyes Of A God and its limitation
you bastard you wouldn't tell him, my eyes are not something he has to know about. also how do you know of the limitations?
because when you entered my world I created, you did not notice your brother was hurt, you had not knowledge of what happened in Japan, there is actually a recording of the accident and him getting his arm and legs torn off and skin scorched on the internet. and yet you knew nothing. why? because of your limitation, you can only see what you pay attention to. and you did not pay any attention to your little brother that you cherish so much
you bastard
I know
fine, I accept the quest. I then had a loading screen, the thing showed me a video of the accident that Richard went through online, it had 20,000 Likes and people commenting on how Richard was an idiot for not just getting out of there, and how the saw him in martial arts tournaments. don't they know how hard it is to think in that situation? and even I have seen his big tournament matches, I even remember the fight he was able to fight all out within his limiter as well...
1 year ago, Richard fought the previous 3 strongest Spirit Force user. he was able to use Physical Failure. it is the opposite of my brother's skill and weakens the target, in the end it was just 2 people in a ring kicking the shit out of each other, both were a bloody stain on the floor at the end of it with Richard only slightly stronger so he won. a close match that had the audience on their seat. they did not even move, they just punched each other and tanked each hit. men are strange creatures, but brother won so I was happy. mom was also watching, she used Universal Alteration and fixed up Richard, oh yea, did I mention mom is the number 1 Spirit Force user? to bad, she is. she can only use her powers once every 2 years but she can change the very world if she wanted.I think it was thanks to her the Virtual Revolution thing got off the ground as she invented the technology and made it cost next to nothing to make more. maybe that is why Richard has to suffer like he does? Damn it mom.
a moment later I was teleported right in front of Richard, he stopped at the sight of me. "Sister?" Richard said after looking at me, then showed shock and I felt his Spirit Force reading mine. wait. he has the ability to sense Spirit Force now? since when? "Your eyes. they are white" Richard said and I face planted. he recognised me but found out about my eyes. "Long time no see. looks like you finally got your Spirit Force out, good for you *SLAP*" I whacked him before he could say any more.
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"Why. you went through so much pain and didn't contact me once? I am your sister. even if we are worlds apart there is no excuse for not telling me" I said whacking him a few more times, wow having 1 strength does nothing, I am hitting as hard as I can and he is hardly taking damage, or is this his Physical Reinforcement?
"Sorry" my brother said to me and I on instinct continued to lecture him for at least another hour. until I realised he went AFK. that idiotic piece of... *sigh* no point in complaining now.
"Who are you. and why is Richard afk because of you?" asked the enemy. I turn around to see 2 people, one had a horrible time at the character customisation screen and the other was the daughter of the man that caused my brother's new found health issue.
"Careful, that is Olivia, the second strongest in the Spirit Force world. she stopped me from becoming number one after I replaced Richard at number 3. the damn bitch has the all seeing eyes" Said Paradox. she was fun to fight, she made everyone else stand still however I could move thanks to my eye. all I had to do was make sure she was unable to undo the knock out, which was easier said then done, I had to put her in a position that no 5 seconds rewinding time could escape.
"that means that... she is Richard's Sister!!!" and now I have to silence everyone here.
"Wait, she is Richard's Sister? oh, so she has to be my sister in law" Paradox said making my face go red, damn it, my brother won't get with a monster like you If I can help it, he will be with a normal girl.
"No, it makes her MY sister in law" Hana said and then her face went red, she has to much pride.
"Neither of you will get with him, I wont allow monsters like you to get with my brother." I said making both of them shocked. "You cant even tell him the truth about how you feel and why you feel that way" I said simply making all 3 of them go red, oh yea, Lin is way to silent and shy, non of them will get with him if I have anything to say about it.
"what about me?" Lin asked in a quiet voice.
"ok, how about this, I will find out who will get with him for definite by using my eyes, I try to avoid looking into the future where possible but I guess this is important" also because I have near no control of what and where I see if I look forward in time.
"Foresight" I said and my eyes started burning, I saw my brother, he was walking around outside of the game, he still in the hospital and his right arm was still healing, his legs were as healed as they would ever get until mother fixed him, I was walking on the roof of the hospital with a limp, the roof had some trees and plant life on it, the place overlooked the main courtyard of the hospital, he looked sad, he looked at the sun set off in the distance, the sky was a burning orange and he had a empty eye looking from his grim face. he then forced on a smile before turning around and walking away...
I came back to my normal senses and there were 3 blurry people standing over me looking worried... how do I explain this one???
"So what did the vision say?" Paradox said after feeling the distortion in time... after looking at me she looked shocked. "Was it bad?" Paradox added. I nodded.
"I can't say much an no mater what I say it wont change what happens as whatever action we take was accounted for in the vision. Richard was on the hospital roof looking sad and gloomy like the world was ending as he looked at the sunset , he then forced a smile before turning around and walking away" I said honestly. all 3 of them looked shocked. Lin Disconnected for some reason and seeing this Hana followed by example.
"so in the end you saw nothing useful?" Paradox said to me. I nodded admittedly. predicting the future is hard, but it would take months before that vision comes to pass. and speaking from experience, a lot can change in a few seconds, let alone a few months.
"Still, he is on the road to recovery so what is the worst that could happen?" I asked and then regretted it, I have read enough books, seen enough movies and played enough games to know NEVER say what is the worst that could happen, Paradox noticed that I said the words that must not be said and hit me on the to of my head, I accepted it as I diverse this one and then felt spike of pain at my head. I walked over to the nearest corner and said in it while hugging my knees.
"I am back, are you done?" Richard said while looking around innocently. "Oh Hana its you, when did you get here?" Richard said and I just walked over to him and hit him on the head, I know it couldn't have hurt yet he played along like it did. he knows even if he is stronger, you don't mess with the women of the house.even dad cant, he just has to hope his ability to ignore pain helps him for when he forgets when a woman says "what?" it is not because they didn't hear you, we are giving you a chance to change your answer. Richard also has this problem. except for him he just has no brain in exchange for his power.
"did you even remember you had a sister while I was gone?" I asked and he flashed a guilty look, I would get more angry with him, but after having his arm and legs torn off and skin burnt to a crisp, I think he has had enough for one week.
"ok, enough about Richard being an idiot, we already established that" Hana said with a serious face.
"hey!" Richard said trying to cut in but we moved on.
"moving onto more important business, why are you even here? what is the strongest going to show up as well?" Hana added and I smiled awkwardly knowing she will probably show up eventually. Hana noticed my expression and punched the ground "You have to be kidding me, whats next? a stronger monster that we don't even know about?" Hana said and I face palmed, EVERY SINGLE ONE? is she trying to jinx it? you just know she is right?
Event: the Neko Capital is under attack from a level 90 GiantStop the Giant before it destroys the capitalFailure to complete mission will result in all people in the capital being captured by the Human Capital and being made to be slaves
AND THERE IT IS!!! I start looking for a way to bring the Giant down but is it a fortress, a level 90 is no push over, it has low intelligence and wisdom but its vitality and strength are in the high one thousands. since I don't want to become some rich nobles sex slave in their basement/dungeon I think I will find a way to kill it, everyone looking at the blue box in front of them is in shock fear or with new found determination. however before I have the chance to act a group of people are already attacking the Giant with all their strength doing no damage, I see brother for a second as he jumps up and powers up with 3 different Physical Reinforcements at the same time and punches the Giant. he got a 1000 times power boost. that has to be cheating. yet it looks like it was not enough, it cause the giant to loose 4 HP. it had 90,000 HP and regeneration apparently. Richard jumped over to me.
"Plan, now" Richard said simply and I looked at the giant. and noticed it was a summoned creature.
"Giant, summoned, kill the caster, giant dies" I said simply and he ran off in search of the caster. I then ran over to Hana, "Shoot Arrows In The EYE" I said and Hana nodded and started firing towards the eyes of the Giant, I then ran over to Lin and at this point I was exhausted. Lin healed me and I felt fine, "Give Buffs to Hana" I said and Lin nodded. Paradox then came to me for her orders.
"I am not a fighter" she said simply and I checked, then made another plan. I shook my head and wore a smile.
"Find the Caster and point Richard in the right direction" I said and Paradox nodded. I cant track the caster myself as my processing speed for information is limited, I would not be able to find them on time and I can't see the link between caster and summoned creature and have 0 idea on what to look for as Luke put limits on my all seeing eye. damn bastard.
"Holy Slash" I heard and idiotic paladin shout as he charged at the Giant. it did no damage, players can't do damage to it, well most players, my brother has cheat codes or something. Holy Shiii......" the paladin said as he was sent flying by the giant with 2 HP. he had very good armour. but not good enough. I laugh as I check on the fallen warrior. he landed right next to me.
"You ok down there?" I ask with an innocent smile poking a little fun at him, he has black hair and red skin. he is a demon class.... a religious demon? that had to be a joke he thought of.
"yea, I am fine, the ground just looked very comfortable." the man said with a smile as he got up and readied his sword again.
"was it?" I asked and he smirked.
"not in the slightest but I got a nice view at least" He said while looking at me and I blushed slightly, he then ran towards the Giant again and Lin healed him on his way past. he then landed right next to me a second time this time face down in the dirt.
"nice view huh?" I said and he got up and I saw through his eyes he got a direct line of sight under my skirt. my face went red and I was about to stop him but I was to late.
"Absolutely" he said while jumping up. and running back to the Giant. I read his name and chuckled to myself.
"UnstoppablePaladin666 huh? so much for unstoppable" I said before laughing to myself. I wonder how Richard was doing? I checked and saw Paradox knocked out and Richard walking directly towards 3 level 46 summoners... I should have guessed this would happen. at least there is someone there with him... but what did I miss???
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Author's Notes
yes, the next chapter will be covering Richards Point Of View so don't worry, you will be following his story again soon.
this chapter would have been around 3 times longer but because I still think this was more then long enough as I don't want to keep you all day I cut is short slightly and broke it up into 3 separate chapters. I wouldn't want to keep you all day. I know a few comments asked me not to but It would have been 3 times the length of the currant chapter. I will make it all one chapter next time if you think you would prefer it that way. let me know in the comment section