Well then, it has come to this. I have written myself in a corner. I am genuinly sorry as I am going to put this story on a hiatus, I started with a fresh idea of this crazy guy developing a world and then to let someone explore the insides of it. But there is no creativity anymore, I can't figure out how to make Peter's story enjoyable to read or write.
It is just bad writing, plain and simple. At least for me, this is not good enough.
You might be reading a stolen copy. Visit Royal Road for the authentic version.
I hope to come back to this site in the future, with a better story which I will continue to enjoy writing. A story that I can call good.
People whom I have asked to do a review swap, please do leave a review. I genuinly enjoy critiscism and it may point me towards the direction I need to go with my writing. I will of course review your stories as well.
Thanks for all the love this story got, readers and followers!
I will be back!