Alright, I think I've decided that if I don't have a chapter ready I'll post these in the meantime. Where I'm at, I know what I want to do, but the proper wording has eluded me thus far. Once I get down literally the next two paragraphs it should move along at a much quicker pace, though. While you wait, I made some pretty major edits to the first three chapters of the story that provide more character and ease the flow of dialogue in general. I've also noticed that I, for some reason, tend to switch from writing in the past tense to writing in the present tense which is completely subconscious and also a horrific oversight that overtly breaks flow and can ruin entire paragraphs from one sentence. I've been going back and changing that where I can, but I'm sure I've missed some so if you see em don't hesitate to point em out.

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That's about it. I'll be on my way and get back to stressing over menial shit. Later