Hello everyone, figured I'd mention it. (It's pretty damn obvious though) It has been a while sense I last did any kind of 'writing' so to say. At least when it comes to doing stories. So bear with me, I can tell you now, I probably wont be going through and rewriting everything, (Hate doing that, it never seems to sound right) but I most likely will go back and fix the paragraphing or what ever is wrong as well as place colored sections for thoughts and stuff kinda like in 'Once a Hero'. So if that pops up its me just trying new ways to write things.
If you're wondering, No I'm not going to be adding any kind of wording with names. In fact, most of my names are going to be mostly English. Sorry if that is something you like but personally, I dislike it. to many this sama that sama stuff. it just doesn't read right for me. I might make some or the majority (MIGHT) of the names correspond to the area that Simon is in. (So Korea now) It's just that when I am reading through after putting in their name such as Cho Sung Ho and Na Sun Yung they just don't sound right. Too add to that, I'm not sure if I can shorten it nor how. If I do make some of them like those it'll be more like I took the name and the mushed it together into a single one. An example would be that Tu Kwang would just be Kang. If you would like to help on that front I'll consider your recommendations when trying to place a name to a specific character. If at any point Simon does encounter one of the people in the actually story (Which he might) I'll be using the name from there. Also like I said, the story goes just like it should except for the fact that I am should be the only anomaly. So it might be that because of my actions that Lee doesn't meet Seoyoon. Something like that, Its not like I'm going to do that but it is a wonderful example.
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Another thing to let you know is that if am allowed I most likely will be going into stories on this site. It'd be a lot of fun to go into some of the different ones on here. So some time in the future I just might get me a World Key! Ya hear that imaginex, one day it will be mine Mwah hahah khhhhh... ('He's dead Jim.' Que the shocked faces "NOOOO!") If you think it'd be kinda of cool mention a book and I'll read through it and see how i could fit my self into the world.
Some of them I'll just not be able to do, others I can see my self but the content lacks, so we'll just have to see.
Oh ya, so I finally got the hang of the tables... Holy hell that was a chore. I can see everyone's aversion too them. They a just repulsive!
At some point those will change too. As well, I did a character sheet instead of a status screen. Basically, the Char. S. holds a lot more stuff then your status. The status is more well stats, health and level. If anyone thinks I did a bad job with them or wants to donate templates for me I would be most appreciative.
Like I think I mentioned, or maybe I didn't. Comment below on your thoughts, It doesn't matter good or bad (It better not be bad or else!!!) as long as it contributes to the progression of my story. Ahead of time thanks for your time and I hope you enjoy my writing as much as I like typing it out.
Oh and remember, Hod rewards those whom share their thoughts! (And he hates spam, and Spam too. That stuff is gross)