HI! Thanks for reading! My command of english is not very good. I will be writing about a chapter a day. If you want the google docs links I can upload it. This is my first serious attempt at writing. The setting of this story was meant to be made into a game but after reading 'SLAVEMANCER' I was inspired to write.
My email is [email protected]. Feel free to drop your suggestion and any area that you think I urgently need to improve on.
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CHAPTER 1
The Golden rays tapped lightly and warmed my face, as I woke up to cool humid breeze of the Vanidan forest. The last thing I could recall before I pass out was being tapped by an old man on the forehead. Much to my ignorance, that was was going to a life changing action that will awaken my unknown origin that will break the limits that were placed on my growth. For the first time since 3 years when my Rite Authorisor was activated, my body felt light and fluid. I laid on the grass thinking of what I should continue to do.
Being disowned and fined by the Dragon Empire a week ago, I lost my drive and motivation to live on. I was the only child of the noble family Hazard. Not being half <
"Activate RA" I commanded.
Name: Valentin Hazard
Race: Unknown
Level: 17
Tier: 10/10
Health: 1045/1045
Mana: 1005/1005
Rank:
-> Power: 718 333 056 / 1 079 136 691
-> Status: 980 600 648 / 1 079 136 691
-> Wealth: 1 079 136 691 / 1 079 136 691
Stats
Strength: 243 <
Agility: 257 <
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Intelligence: 127 <
Vitality: 209 <
Wisdom: 402 <
Luck: 70 <
Passives:
Blessed by a dying century old Fairy: This Passive is last spell cast by a fairy consuming all their Mana. This passive will last till Valentin reaches tier 3 Level 50. This passive will allow Valentin to gain 4x stats gained from leveling up at tier 1, 2x stats gained at tier 2 and 1.5x at tier 3.
Properties(Land): None
Guild: None
Equipment:
Hazard Daggers <
Storage Belt <
White Shirt <
Pants <
Boots <
The moment I read the passive I was hit by a flashback of what happened.
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I saw myself walking into the forest, whistling a tune that used to be a lullaby that sleep to when I was an infant. I looked at the ground and saw a trail of blood. I started to follow the trail as I quickly took out a red medium-quality potion. I ended up in the middle of the forest where an old man lies on the grass. I elevated his head slightly and treated him with the potion that I took out while tracking. The potion finishes as the man regain conscious. He coughed out some dark blood.
"Thank you, young one. It is already time for me to die. There is no potion that can save me now." he said as cough out more blood.
He tapped my forehead and the lukewarm feeling started to spread from his touch. His bodied glowed and rose to the sky as my vision blurred. In a second, darkness engulfed my vision.
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I stood up and headed for the nearest town from Vanidan forest. I thought to myself touching the handle of the dagger. Finally, I have new light which is showing me the way. I grin as I picked up the pace and head out of the forest.
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1 more post coming up about how most of the things in this story works.