I got a fairly positive feedback from some of the comments you guys posted. It seemed like you a lot of you thought the elements thing was somewhat weird but liked it at the same time. I think one of the reasons I wasn't satisfied with the chapter was because I kept trying to make the character more and more OP based on some comments I got about it. I mean I like MC's being OP but I don't think it's my style. Sorry but I might change Chapter 7:Force Power a little bit. There will still be  the idea of elements, but I got a suggestion to change his manipulative powers from all 4 elements to only 2. I will probably edit it, but I don't want just do it with out telling you guys.

Also I know I've been putting up 1 or 2 chapters up a day, but I'm a college student and finals are coming up. This'll prob mean that the next few chapters might be on hold for a couple of days, a week max. In general I don't think I can produce a chapter a day though. D:

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But thanks so far, I enjoy writing for you guys. Don't think I've been flamed too badly yet. lots of constructive and good comments.

Just want to tell you a few things that might be coming up. IDK if this counts as a spoiler or not, but I will put up a spoiler window just incase. Don't read if you feel like your going to regret it. But if you do, it's nothing that major.

Spoiler :

*There will be some romance, not sure how detailed or well I can write about it, will try though. Maybe not for a little bit

*Rolg and Pups will get split up

*Pets?

I know some people will think this is a waste of time, but as always....

Tell me your thoughts

Thanks for reading.