I would like to sincerely thank the people who reviewed this story. Escpecially Bluesappire.

Thank you, your review was especially helpful. 

Now for those people who think I reviewed my own story on purpose, it is not so. That review was meant for Brave World Online. 

I know it will offend people who take the time to review my story and I sincerely apologize for my mistake. TT

This tale has been unlawfully lifted without the author's consent. Report any appearances on Amazon.

I plan to delete it ASAP but I cant seem to do it fron

My phone

I hope you will continue to stick with the story.

Please comment your thoughts on the story or give it a review and help me grow as a writer