Hi guys! As I prepare to write more of the second book (not very far in, only 20 or so chapters at the moment), I'm curious for feedback on the first. To that end, I have a series of questions I'd like to ask my readers to get an idea of where I could take the story.

What was your favorite part and why?

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Your favorite character, main and side...and why?

What do you think might happen in the future?

What do you hope will happen in the future?

Now a few critiquing questions.

What did you like the least and why?

Was there a point the story seemed to drag on?

Was there a character I didn't give enough attention to?

Least favorite character and why?

Feel free to bring up anything else you'd like. :)