So, once again, the trial received more dissatisfied feedback from this audience than anything I've done prior.

I think I have a way to fix this.

This means backing out the last three chapters and reposting. I can get it done this weekend.

What do you think?

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I think the fixes are 1. Azbekt. Remove the full-on douchebaggery persona. He would still not be a sweetheart by any means, but if instead of being a raging a*hole, he would be super lawful. He acknowledges Joe's actions healing the ship. He still has to bring Joe in and present Groven's case, rules are rules, after all. But he can note to the trial he does not sense evil off Joe just a hint of fea.

And 2, Hawking suggests the Trial by Quest. The entity realizes he/she/it screwed up dropping Joe in front of Groven and so will give the tool to will prove Joe's innocence. Better chance to dialog between Joe and Hawking as to the use of Trial by Quest.