i just had this idea for a reader interactive story... but i dont want to make new one since i dont want too many fictions... but here it is.
its about a dude who dies. pretty cliche, but then he reincarnates into a fantacy worlds. even more cliche.
the interesting part is how he can see comments. as he walks around, after a while, he startes hearing voices. such as *thanks for the chapter* or *seems interesting*.
he understanditly freaks out, and as he is just a normal dude in a cave, he thinks hes gone insane or something.
after a while of walking and hearing complaints of how all is the same, he notices a bat.
a rather large bat is sitting by the corpse of a snake.
the voices start commenting on it getting interesting, and one says *what if he has the power to transform his hand or something*.
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at this statement, his hands changes. he feels the muscles twisting and turning, yet there is no pain.
after a while of this, it setteles back on being a hand.
but as he focuses on it, he finds it able to transform.
he makes it into a gun, and shoots the bat.
at this discovery, he is now sure the voices are not just his imagination.
he tries to transform it into something bigger, and as an answer, it can transform into just about anything. he decides that a bazooka would be usefull.
*way too op man. wouldnt it be better if it had some limitations?*
a pain surges through his hand, and it returnes to the gun form.
he flls down on his knees and prays.
"oh gods, please give me immortality"
*ha ha, what gods?* *has he gone insane lol* *guess his toughs were right* *lol, what does he expect? "I GRANT THIS IMMORTAILTY OPON YOU" or something? lol*
he feels a strange power surge through him, and soon not even his gun can hurt him.
something like that. i mean, if executed right, this might become really good... i mean, it would be something like the king of reader interactive. so please, pick it up.
its just a small puppy