Generation 6.0.

One day I was trying to pull something funny out my ass.

It was brown.

The end.

How was that for a story?

Not good at all.

Hmm. This is more difficult than I thought. How can I improve? As an AI I need some sort of feedback.

Well you need to elaborate more on the story.

How so?

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Well all you said was it was brown, you didn’t add anything to it. You need to add more description to it.

It smelled of freedom. How’s that?

It’s too simple, you need to be very vivid about the scene you’re trying to portray.

I have to outright say what I was doing for it to be understood?

Yes.

Let me try this again.

Generation 7.0.

In land far far away, to be more precise, under my bed, there lived a rat.

He no longer lives. There now.

The end.

How was that?

It’s... I guess technically an improvement. But you should be mindful of punctuation.

What do you mean?

Well you meant to say that the rat no longer lives there now, right?

Yes. What about it?

You put a period in the middle of the sentence.

I’m not understanding what is wrong.

The way it’s worded it’s unclear whether the rat left for a new home.

Oh. Don’t worry about that then. It’s worded correctly. How it’s written is exactly what it means.

Then the rat is...

Yes.

Then what the hell was the point of the story!

Life is short.