I will describe any significant changes I make in the revision process of this story here.

Planned changes:

> The four chapters in Castle Bosporus will be moved to the Epilogue.

> Additional conversations expanding upon the relationship between Izanagi and Tantalus will be added.

> The conversation between Dogwood, Feldrast, and Tantalus will be added.

> Maria Feldrast will be made into a Colonel to fix any confusion.

> The descriptions of Feldrast, Svenheim, and Izanagi will be changed.

> Many of the players' statistics and the rate of progression will be changed.

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> The title will be changed to Ferrum Online.

> Many of the uses of brackets will be changed to bold lettering.

> The titles of the early chapters will be changed to better fit with the current naming convention.

> Some of the chapters might be added together if I feel that certain chapters are too short.

> Most of the chapters will be renumbered once I am done with the other changes.

> I will read through the story and make changes wherever necessary to make it sound better.

Changes:

> The title has been changed to Ferrum Online.

> The cover art has been changed.

> The chapters describing the events in Castle Bosporus have been moved to the Epilogue.

> Some character descriptions have been changed.

> Most uses of brackets have been changed to bold lettering.

> The System has been significantly overhauled.

> Maria Feldrast has been made a Colonel.

> Many chapters have been consolidated.

> Most chapter titles have been changed.

> Trismegistus has been replaced with Mozaic in the operation with the S-ranks at the end of Day 2.

> Izanagi now dies after his battle with the Second Dark Apostle.